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[aiisling]

Author: Aiisling
Title: The Inherent Dangers of Pity and Love: A Plaude fic of 15th century Italy (Entry 7)
Pairing: Peter/Claude
Rating: pg-13
Warnings/Spoilers: Torture

Summary: By the time the 1400's rolled about, Italy existed primarily as five major city states, one of them being Florence. This is a story about a Prince of that esteemed and

Comments

[aunt_zelda]

Ack! Sylar! I mean Gabriel! *falls to the floor and twitches with happiness*
Sorry, I'm kinda obsessed with Sylar ...
They ... they burned a little girl?! *hides under the bed with katana, wooden stakes, and pair of Sai*

The truth filled his bones with silver as he slipped off the ledge into the realm of sleep.
That's just beautiful.
And the interactions between Peter and Claude: loving it!

[aiisling]

"They ... they burned a little girl?! *hides under the bed with katana, wooden stakes, and pair of Sai*"

What are Sai?

"And the interactions between Peter and Claude: loving it!"
Merci! More of that coming ^_^ And I love that you thought that line was beautiful *happy dance*

[aunt_zelda]

What are Sai?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sai_%28weapon%29
They used them in 'The Mummy Returns' and 'Daredevil.'

More of that coming
Good!

[aiisling]

ahhh, thank you!

[c_quinn]

Read this last night but was too tired to comment: great as always.

Loved this: that the emotions were tangled and unclear. After a few moments, however, he relaxed, letting the strangeness of human touch be.

[aiisling]

Thankie! Love it when lines get picked out *grin*

[indyhat]

“Shite!”

<3 Claude.

raggedy crosshatching that was all that remained of his back and chest

Aiiiii. *whimpers*

The truth filled his bones with silver as he slipped off the ledge into the realm of sleep.

Lovely.

This fic is great. And I'm now pretty scared for Peter and what's going to happen to him ...

[aiisling]

"Aiiiii. *whimpers*"
Y'know, I'm glad the story is starting to move away from Claude's tortured body, because I am running out of ways to describe his slashed, narsty skin XD

"Lovely."
Ooh, second comment on one line! *happy dance*

"This fic is great. And I'm now pretty scared for Peter and what's going to happen to him ..."
Thank you! The next part will most likely be up tonight, tomorrow at the latest *V for victory!*

[indyhat]

Well, I'd be lying if I said that I wasn't, in some sadistic way, enjoying Claude being tortured, but it's really only so Peter can rescue him :)

I think you've posted the next part, so I'm going to go off in a sec and find that! Yay!

[cucumber_k]

Boy, that doesn't sound good at all. Don't let Pietro get caught!

The whole power-play between Natanaele and Gabriel was priceless.

And the scene between Claude and Pietro was beautiful.

I don't think I've said it before, but I absolutely adore your writing style.

[aiisling]

"I don't think I've said it before, but I absolutely adore your writing style."
Thank you! *floats away due to inflated ego*

[anonymous]

Hello.

I don't have an lj account, but I like this story and wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying it. Also, I am curious about your italian, because though I'm not a native speaker I think that sometimes it is incorrect. I think, for instance, that monella means "naughty girl" and does not at all seem right in the context of that sentence. Even if you translate the 'naughty' as frivilous it doesn't seem quite right, also it would still be in the feminine form... anyway, it doesn't really detract from the talented writing, but I thought I'd let you know.

[aiisling]

I expected as much. I'm using some online dictionary, which I know is COMPLETELY unreliable. But it gives the story atmoshphere, so...*shrugs*

I'm glad you're liking the story!