[fic] Spontaneity - Yugioh, YamixYugi, romance/serious, PG-13, theme 062 (100_chances)

[aijou_aibou]

Theme: 062 - Spontaneity; for 100_chances
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Genre: Romance/serious
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Yami/Yugi
Archive: Here
Warnings: AU
Spoilers: None
Summary:  An unknown future was scary, but a future without him even more so, and if he didn't take the chance he'd always wonder what he'd lost by not going.
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Comments

[strawberrykaoru]

Maybe because there's a lot more dialogue, so that's why you feel it's kind of flat/listless? It's a good concept though - ELOPE IS THE WAY TO GO, obviously.

Also, stupid parents. I can never get over this. XD They crop up a lot in your stories lollll - not that it's a bad thing!

/looks forward to next theme 8D
That reminds me to write my own and post the next. Damn.

[aijou_aibou]

Maybe? Iunno, I normally feel like more dialogue livens up a story. I just wish I could have done the concept better justice.

I'm obsessed with the parent trouble tropes...I don't know why, considering I had a fairly stable childhood parent-wise! Go figure. ^^;

Thank you~