[fic] Paranoia - Yugioh, 'Atemu'xYugi, drama/serious, PG-13, theme 065 (100_chances)

[aijou_aibou]

Theme: 065 - Paranoia; for 100_chances
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Genre: Drama/serious
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: 'Atemu'/Yugi implied, past 'Atemu'/Jounouchi implied
Archive: Here
Warnings: AU, drug smuggling, violence, swearing
Spoilers: None
Summary: He knew the gun was loaded but he didn't think it'd kill...
Disclaimer: Yugioh is not

Comments

[akeyami]

Ooooh, what a thrilling way to mark your birthday! I was riveted the whole time I was reading this! Awesome work, thank you so much!

And of course, Happy Birthday!!!!

[aijou_aibou]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was really proud of this theme. =')

[akeyami]

good! live it up in the Keys for me on your birthday, ne? I'm missing Marathon something awful, and my mom's there right now, which makes me even more jealous, LOL

[hello203]

Happy birthday! *sending virtual cake now*
Well that was an unusual theme, in such an amazing way. Where do I begin?
I loved Atemu's paranoïa. It suited him so well. :3 It makes sense that he'd become a shadow of himself after losing someone as close as Jou. And Yugi! Oh god, Yugi. <3 He was so badass and yet so himself(come on, you cute little thing, don't sell drugs, that's not nice!). XD
The story was interesting. I loved how you made me feel compassion for drug dealers! :D Itami was my favorite.
“Please, stay with him or the dumbass will never heal.” <- I literally laughed out loud when I read this. So cute!
Can haz sequel nao plz?
Seriously, I'd totally read a chapter fic with Yugi and Yami being all angsty and cute and doing things like drug dealing or robbing banks. XD

[aijou_aibou]

Thank youuu! xD

I'm so glad you liked it. =D I was excited for this theme and getting a comment like yours is the best thing ever!

Maybe I could make them thieves. I like thieves. x3 Then they could get hurt and Itami could show up and be snarky at them again. xD

[hello203]

(you're welcome) XD

YES. DO IIIIIT. <3

[strawberrykaoru]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHEY!! /CONFETTI

This is absolutely lovely. The right mix of bittersweet angst, mopey!Yami, and the topic. THE TOPIC. You know I'm all over this sort of stuff...from the legal perspective. I'm glad this wasn't written with a romantic viewpoint (or at least, so subtle I didn't manage to catch it/it's been covered up by the protectiveness, etc.), because this is one of your bests. <33

I loved the OCs too - especially Itami. I think he won me over with his line, "Please, stay with him or the dumbass will never heal." XD

What's happened to your computer now? ;_;

[aijou_aibou]

Heee, thank you! I had a feeling you'd like it because of the criminal element. (Although this is like...the opposite of your vocation, since you're on the legal side. xD) But yeah, pure romance wouldn't have worked. Too dark of a topic for that and I wanted it to be realistic. Protectiveness is better anyway. x3

Everyone likes Itami. xD I think half the reviews I got mentioned him. It's kind of rare for an OC of mine to be so liked. Yay! I'm going to end up doing a prequel/sequel and bringing him back at this rate...

It's...dead. D= Yesterday it had a virus I guess and I thought I fixed it, but today it won't even turn on. ;__;

[fantasia0829]

Loved it! It was such a thrilling read! :D

[aijou_aibou]

Thank you! I'm glad you thought so!

[ladybastet92]

LOVE ♥