[fic] Someday - Yugioh, AtemuxHeba, R, angst/romance, theme 074 (100_chances)

[aijou_aibou]

Theme: 074 - Someday; for 100_chances
Author: Chey (duelist_gurl163)
Genre: Angst/romance
Rating: R
Pairings: Atemu/Heba
Archive: Here
Warnings: AU-ish, slightly-explicit sex
Spoilers: None
Summary:  He was going to choose the kingdom over Heba -- not because he wanted to, but because he had to -- but he could not begrudge his lover one

Comments

[strawberrykaoru]

I really liked this, Chey, don't you feel embarrassed/ashamed! Especially when I've written worse haha.

That said, I noticed the dialogue's been changed to fit Ancient Egypt/ancient times~~ Really like that touch. ♥ And aaah how forward, Heba! ;A; Last line killed meeee. ;_;

[aijou_aibou]

I'm so awkward about these things! xD

Yay, you noticed the dialogue! You're the first person to comment on that. I worked really hard trying to make it a little more archaic. ^^;

Thank you~

[hello203]

Ooh, angsty ancient edjipshun romance. :3
It was very cute. ^_^

[aijou_aibou]

Thank you! Yes, this was a pretty angsty one...xD

[fantasia0829]

Awww... I really hate it that Atemu had to do this, but I suppose he is a king first and a lover second. :(

[aijou_aibou]

Yep. =( Leaders can't be selfish and have to keep their personal lives in second place.