Comments | aiki_esque: Mapping things out; SHINee drabbles; PG-13; 1670 words

aiki_esque

Mapping things out; SHINee drabbles; PG-13; 1670 words

Apr 30, 2011 18:29

Title: Mapping things out

Rating: PG-13

Pairing/Focus: Several

Summary: And we play it slow and steady, first with fingerprints on shoulders and slow lingering touches. A different tone in our voices, the way you say my name, the letters dragging on, the way no one else can do it.

A few SHINee drabbles I regurgitated out while listening to songs ( Read more... )

!fanfic, pairing: several, rating: pg-13

Comments 4

chun_ji April 30 2011, 15:29:11 UTC

that was absolutely gorgeous. i enjoyed all of them. you have such a lovely way with words.

Then you tell me that you’re never going away. You tell me that this time, you’re staying.

I love the way you say my name, so don’t ever stop

It’s fine to be as human as possible around you. It’s hard, but it’s okay.

I would feel torn between the land and the sky, but it’s okay, because you’re stuck with me in the middle

i think all of them could be developed into really awesome fics. i especially liked your observations about being human in the jongkey one, i thought they were reall true :"> thank you for sharing ♥

aiki_esque May 2 2011, 12:07:59 UTC

Thank you! Frankly, I was most pleased with the way the jongkey "Human" one turned out. I'm really glad you liked it too! Maybe I SHOULD try to write actually fics based off these. But I don't know, sometimes when I do that, it just turns out weird. Anyway, thanks for your comment! :)

yui8_lin May 5 2011, 01:49:06 UTC

Really this drabbles are WOW.
I think all of them, at least all that I read (Sorry I read 2mins and Jongkeys no others :/), really could be long fics because of the story you narrate..

I LOVE the Jongkeys, both were soooo good, specially the Human :].
And the 2Min <3 was so beautiful :)

Thanks for the drabbles! :D
Bye...

aiki_esque May 5 2011, 15:19:22 UTC

Thank you so much! :) Nah I understand. Jongkey and 2min are my favourite pairings too. I'm slowly learning to love the other pairings. I think I'll try to make some of them (especially 'Human' because I'm such a Jongkey stan) into long fics because I really like the direction they are going in. Thank you for your wonderful comment ;__; I am touched.