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[aikowritesfic]

Title: Serpent
Author: Aiko - aikowritesfic
Pairing: Pin, sortof onesided Pikame.
Genre: I don't even know. AU, maybe?
Warnings: Character death.
Disclaimer: Jin's not mine - you guys can have him, though I'm not sure you'll want what's left after this. Pikame are mine though. Ha.
Summary: Kazuya isn't the type to sit around and mope. He'll take what he wants,

Comments

[saturnianlove]

Ohhh! Poor Jin! *cries* The Pin relationship here is so sweet. Yamapi's characterization is really great, too...I love innocent!Yamapi! Kame though...ARGH. But the way you shaped his character was well done, you can see how the jealousy and manipulation come together to make one twisted person that feels no guilt, rather, pride at having killed Jin. Poor Jin!

This was really good! But next time can we kill off Kame and have some happy Pin? :D

[saturnianlove]

oh, and this is definitely my favorite part:
They're together, you see. Jin and Tomohisa. They've been together since before anyone can remember clearly, and it's for this reason that you despise Akanishi Jin more than anything. Indeed, it's one of his favourite things to put his arm around his blushing boyfriend's waist and boast loudly about how in love they are. Especially the last line.

[aikowritesfic]

Ohh, someone other than me likes innocent!Pi? That's how I always write him and before now I've been told it's totally wrong. XD; And yet I persist!

I never wrote Pin before. o-o; You think it worked? ^^;

Kame is an evil, evil boy. XD I hope I made him believable though... This is my first time trying the ever-popular second person too. XD; Lots of firsts!

Thanks for reading, and for such a nice comment. ^-^ Maybe I'll write happy Pin later... It might suck though. XD;

[lovelovearashi]

now he's done it O_O zomg!!!

[aikowritesfic]

Haha. XD Thanks for reading~

[ptoridactyl]

wow
thats some serious jin killing

[aikowritesfic]

Indeed it is. ♥ Thanks for reading. ^^

[tomosuki]

LOL! The JMD campaign seems to be in full swing! XD I loved your descriptions. And evil!kame. ♥

[aikowritesfic]

Because it's so much fun to kill Jin, obviously. XDD Thanks for reading~*

[didikoishi]

I love innocent!Pi and even evil!Kame since PiKame is concerned. I hope you will continue this fic. Now without Jin on the way the devilish Kazuya could accomplish his task seducing Pi... *evil laugh*