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The Most Beautiful (Suho/Xiumin)

Sep 02, 2014 05:43

Title: The Most Beautiful
Rating: PG
Word Count: 4202
Summary: Mermen are known to be very expensive pets and only very rich people have them. aka a fish-hybrid!AU
Warning: no beta lol also I was upset when I wrote this so it's probably incoherent and stuff yep~

Notes: Filled for this prompt
( Joonmyeon always had an affinity with water )

xiumin, fic, suho

Comments 10

canadaphile September 7 2014, 01:08:31 UTC

I enjoyed your wordvomit. This was so precious! Sad about the fate of the merfolk, but the connections in the houses and the big water gardens sounds simply amazing.

Large feline eyes blinked at Joonmyeon. But kitties don’t like water! Joonmyeon thought to himself. Catfish. uwu

Lu Han was very enthusiastic about being near Minseok’s person usually and Joonmyeon had not appreciated it so much. Oh, Lu Han. ♥

Kissing Joonmyun probably isn't the best way to give him air. |D Poor guy's brain probably shut down a bit.

Mrs Kim is adorable. Not caring that her dress got wet when carrying Minseok, taking photos of them as little babes...then big babes. UwU ♥♥♥

Really, do not be sorry about this. There are some punctuation errors, and the font changes size near the end, but the core content is really great! I enjoyed it a lot. You write well.

=^..^=~

ailiblue September 7 2014, 22:54:01 UTC

Aw thank you for reading!

LOL Minseok is secretly a catfish hybrid shhhhhh

Mrs Kim is the best <3 She probably has tons of pictures of them to embarrass them later on with haha

Thank you for pointing those out! I'll re-read to catch the mistakes and LOL I tried to fix the font so many times cause apparently LJ doesn't like it when you c&p from your textmaker haha

Thank you again for reading! <3

canadaphile September 7 2014, 23:13:28 UTC

You're welcome! c:

LJ does not like copy-pasting, but if you put in the basic HTML for italics, bold, etc., you can paste into the HTML option, and it won't hose up paragraph spacing.

ailiblue September 7 2014, 23:17:56 UTC

Ohhh thanks for the tip! I'll try that! :D

purple_aki October 17 2014, 14:12:47 UTC

this is cute and pretty. merboy umin is so cute. and of course suho would be a rich boy with clumsy and helpless attitude kkkkk.
I love how suho's mom is so cool about minseok wetting her dress and taking pics of her son and his lovely merboy..

ailiblue October 20 2014, 02:45:32 UTC

Ah thank you for reading!

Suho's mom is probably my favorite character, tbh. She's just so chill, haha.

vvipforseungri April 25 2015, 00:03:58 UTC

omg this one was yours??? i'd read it ages ago and really liked it uwu

ailiblue April 27 2015, 15:49:45 UTC

Aw thank you! I never know when people read my things tbh. ^__^ I'm glad you liked it though <3

alexa31 July 11 2015, 07:31:32 UTC

Gosh, I only found this a few months ago? I can't tell you how many times I've read this. And I was confused as to how I haven't read it earlier!! I adore this. It's so beautifully crafted, honestly. Sad about how they live and survive now (the mermaids'), but really interesting, and imaginative!

ailiblue July 13 2015, 16:23:20 UTC

Oh my! Thank you for reading this! I didn't really advertise the fic on anything like sncj so I'm surprised anyone found it at all haha. I remember writing this in a flurry of emotions but I actually really love this fic a lot because of the world so I'm glad other people like it too! ^___^ <3