Chapter Three

[ailsa_chan]

Now well over the fifteen thousand word limit. Aiming for 5 thousand a chapter seems to be a good way of pacing things and making sure I don't rush things and miss bits out. Much happier with the dialogue this time. This next chapter also has burlesque girls and violence. Enjoy.

Comments

[jagohaft]

I am doing research for my university thesis, thanks for your great points, now I am acting on a sudden impulse.