Chapter Six, Finally Finished

[ailsa_chan]

I really hated writing this chapter. I don't think it's dreadful, just not very interesting. I'd be especially interested in seeing what people thought of this one, as I expect it's going to be heavily edited in time.

Comments

[tellezara]

Yeah, I see why you had trouble with this chapter - it's one of those ones where you need some diddy bits in it to set the way for chapters to come, and then end up having to pad out the rest to make it into a fullbodied chapter. Your descriptive writing is pretty good, though, and there's enough Tobin/Milo interaction that you can get away with it in the name of character development ;)