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Nov 14, 2004 09:43

You know what's worse than being flamed for poems? It's not getting any response at all. Thanks guys ( Read more... )

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niphredil100 November 13 2004, 13:07:38 UTC

Oh hun, I'm sorry **goes to read poem** It was interesting, I've never played the saxophone before, but I enjoyed the similis and metaphors you used. The poem, in short, was very good.

Ha! Yesterday I was baby-sitting and woke up at half six. It sucked. But I lay in bed till eight. Yay for... well... I don't know. You do feel rather p and at 'em when you're the first one up don't you?

aim_toothpaste November 14 2004, 13:10:02 UTC

Thanks sweetie. I can't play the saxophone very well, but I try. No actually, if my progress is anything to go by, I don't.

gifted_dream November 13 2004, 14:36:39 UTC

I didn't comment because I don't really like poetry...It's just not my thing. Don't feel bad, though!

aim_toothpaste November 14 2004, 13:13:04 UTC

That's fine. It was more directed at the friends who normally help me out with BETAing.

adept_starsong November 13 2004, 16:02:21 UTC

Oh great, so now the comment bar pops up with great speed and adroitness, when I don't really have a need for it. *Kicks stupid, controversial computer ( ... )

aim_toothpaste November 14 2004, 13:15:21 UTC

I'm sure I commented on the last poem you posted...I swear I did. *sulks*

I do not mumble and hide.

And you don't suck at critique...

Thanks sweetie.

sweet_raindrops November 13 2004, 16:56:07 UTC

Yeah. Sucks, doesn't it ( ... )

adept_starsong November 13 2004, 17:14:32 UTC

*Still really doesn't get it* I really don't. And I;ve been online for two hours, stalking people.

I now feel silly, so I will leave.

But I have changed my LJ theme! HA! The things I can accomplish in....um, two....hours. *Clears throat* Okay, I'm going to go...study. Maybe. Not. Possibly. Could be...

~ Starsong

aim_toothpaste November 14 2004, 13:18:42 UTC

Thanks Zsofi, hun.

Yeah, I wasn't so sure about the flute bit...It was hard though. I was trying to work out how to describe the other instruments last night, and I couldn't very easily.

And I'm trying to think of something different to say.

Have fun with the rtt. *grins*

catrat November 14 2004, 13:37:56 UTC

As usual I am shocked and stunned by the goodness of your poem, I could never write like that, and if I did I'd probably die from the shock and then be dead...
Yeah I like the dirty bit, it's pretty damned nifty, you seem to know lots of simile/metaphor type things and there's some lines there I really love.
So it's good:)