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Fic: Now I Lay me Down to Sleep [Inception]

Jul 31, 2010 14:24

Title: Now I Lay me Down to Sleep
Character/Pairings: Cobb/?, mentions of Arthur, James, Phillipa
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: It all belongs to Mr. Nolan
Author's Notes: Written for a prompt over on inception_kink : "And if I die before I wake, I pray the Lord my soul to take."

( She's not awake. She knows she's not. She's been through this too many times to not know the difference between dreaming and reality, and it's really a wonder that Dom doesn't. )

fic: inception, pairing: ariadne/cobb

Comments 23

spiffynamehere July 31 2010, 18:31:52 UTC

That. That was just gorgeous, thank you. /OP

aimlesstravels August 1 2010, 18:01:46 UTC

I'm so glad you like it!!
As soon as I saw the prompt, I knew I needed to write it. Thank you! :)

incandescent July 31 2010, 20:23:14 UTC

Oh, so devastating. This was really amazing and perfect. I love good twist, and this was it. Wonderful, perfect, and so heart wrenching.

aimlesstravels August 1 2010, 18:02:53 UTC

Thanks, bb!
Making it mysterious was a bit of a challenge, since there really are only two females in the entire film (not counting Phillipa or the blonde Eames forged himself into). Glad you liked it! :)

niftywithan August 1 2010, 00:08:54 UTC

OH NO! ;A;

Wondrous, as usual. Your writing is poetic and lovely, bb, but it tends to break my heart! Loved this - very beautiful.

aimlesstravels August 1 2010, 18:03:38 UTC

Yep! Poor Ariadne. :(
I know, I know. Angst is all I can dish out!!
Thanks for reading! ♥

zoi_no_miko August 1 2010, 00:46:20 UTC

Ohh, now that is just too heartbreaking ;___;

aimlesstravels August 1 2010, 18:03:52 UTC

*hugs*
♥

qt_2t94 August 1 2010, 18:06:32 UTC

gnngg no words <3

aimlesstravels August 1 2010, 20:35:03 UTC

Thanks for reading. :)
Glad you enjoyed!