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aimlesstravels

Fic: Death, be not Proud [Inception]

Jul 31, 2010 23:10

Title: Death, be not Proud
Character/Pairings: Arthur/Eames, Mal/Cobb
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Mr. Nolan owns it all
Warnings: Character death (kind of)
Author's Notes: Written to fulfill the prompt "blood loss" for ( Read more... )

fic: inception, hc_bingo, pairing: mal/cobb, pairing: arthur/eames

Comments 59

sunnyskittlez August 1 2010, 04:11:37 UTC

;_; well I basically loved this.

aimlesstravels August 2 2010, 03:15:34 UTC

Your icon makes me smile. :)
Thanks for reading, dear. Glad you enjoyed!

raz0rgirl August 1 2010, 04:26:12 UTC

Man, this fandom is bringing out a lot of *excellent* writers. This was lovely and funny and devastating and an absolute treat to read. Thank you.

aimlesstravels August 2 2010, 03:16:54 UTC

*blush*
Why thank you for the high praise.
And thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

bonifacio August 1 2010, 04:45:28 UTC

YOU KILLED HIM :((((

Broke my heart, man. But I lurve it like burning.

aimlesstravels August 2 2010, 03:17:43 UTC

I DID. :(
Sorry, bb. But! But! The prompt, it made me!
Thanks for reading!

compactstars August 1 2010, 05:01:08 UTC

Ahhhhh. Why you gotta break my heart every night, bb!?! D:

This was amazing. <3

aimlesstravels August 2 2010, 03:19:08 UTC

Um...sorry about the heartbreak, bb. *offers duct tape and chocolate*
Glad you enjoyed, despite the pain. ;)

I cried suerum August 1 2010, 05:02:12 UTC

I was listening to Melody Gardot singing, "I'm a Fool" as I read it and maybe that had something to do with it but really, this was great. The pacing, first Eames, then Eames and Cobb and Mal and then Eames and Arthur (and Arthur's scary subconscious-bloody chainsaws, ick!) and finally concerned Arthur and then devastated Arthur. It was perfectly done and I wanted to save Eames as much as Arthur did. It was really special the way you managed to cram their life togethre in all of Eame's last random thoughts and worries for Arthur. Excellent use of the repetition trope to create a unique story and world.

Re: I cried aimlesstravels August 2 2010, 03:21:13 UTC

Tissues! Tissues all around!!
Yeah...the bloody chainsaws were an afterthought, but it's good to know they had the effect they did. Poor Eames. I halfway wanted to save him too, but the prompt refused. :(
The last random thoughts were meant to be especially bittersweet, and I'm glad it worked for you.
Thanks for reading, dear!