It's based on a picture I found on DeviantArt amongst a heap of stock photos. I found the one of a woman in that pose and decided to make a pic around it...
my only crits would be the elbow on her right arm seems somewhat distorted. if you've used a reference pic for this and the elbow proportions are the same as the one in the original it is worth noting that occasionally proportions in reference photos don't translate well into every style of artwork. try altering it a little and see what you come up with.
secondly, the gun should be moved back towards her ever so slightly. and i'm talking only a few pixels here, just to line her thumb up with the gun and give her fingers enough room to wrap around the handle.
i'm sorry if i'm being a little blunt, i do a lot of critiquing :)
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thats groovy, is it of anyone in particular?
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It's based on a picture I found on DeviantArt amongst a heap of stock photos. I found the one of a woman in that pose and decided to make a pic around it...
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my only crits would be the elbow on her right arm seems somewhat distorted. if you've used a reference pic for this and the elbow proportions are the same as the one in the original it is worth noting that occasionally proportions in reference photos don't translate well into every style of artwork. try altering it a little and see what you come up with.
secondly, the gun should be moved back towards her ever so slightly. and i'm talking only a few pixels here, just to line her thumb up with the gun and give her fingers enough room to wrap around the handle.
i'm sorry if i'm being a little blunt, i do a lot of critiquing :)
awesome piece though!
*MWAH*
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I'm glad you like it...but I've still got a lot of work to do on it.
Don't worry, you're not being blunt at all, I mean, I'm not going to get any better without seeing my flaws... :D
I did follow the shape of the reference photo, and I was thinking the same about the arm...I'm gonna do some fixing up of this tomorrow...
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