Comments | aine_marihugh: September, Week 2, "Gear" 1180 words

aine_marihugh

September, Week 2, "Gear" 1180 words

Sep 13, 2009 18:08

Hi Flamers! While I fully intended to write a self-contained little short-story, that isn't at all what happened. I started to get into the characters and it got away from me and before I knew it, I was fully aware that I was writing a mere snippet of something much larger. Me? Something larger? I know, right? I'm shocked! It cuts to a different ( Read more... )

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becomingayogini September 14 2009, 00:41:50 UTC

Ooh ooh I want more!! More please!

innana88 September 14 2009, 03:36:00 UTC

I'm glad you like it. Thank you for popping over, my lovely! By the way, went to TJ Maxx last week. TOTALLY thought of you.

darlinleo September 14 2009, 03:24:32 UTC

This is so interesting!! I really like the world you've created here, that dialogue is terrific as well!

*coughs*
Sequel, anyone?

innana88 September 14 2009, 03:34:07 UTC

I'm so glad you like it! The world was really unintentional. It started as a mundane camping trip!

By the way, if you ever call yourself a pitiful author again, I'll kick your ass. Not allowed. LIES! LIES!

darlinleo September 14 2009, 03:41:40 UTC

(the word was actually pathetic ;))
That damn story is growing way too large, and I had mucho stuff still stuck in my head that I couldn't get written quickly enough! Arrrggghh!

It is totally cool that this took on a life of its own completely off the path you meant. That's awesome when stories do that!
♥

innana88 September 14 2009, 03:35:09 UTC

There was supposed to be a "THANK YOU!" in there, as well. :D

EDITOR Part One toxic_apiaceae September 14 2009, 17:15:20 UTC

Hi! I get to be one of your editors this week, and I have to say I was a little excited about this. I've really enjoyed reading your stuff so far, so this was a real treat ( ... )

EDITOR Part Two toxic_apiaceae September 14 2009, 17:21:51 UTC

["Sure you are." Danderoff said nothing. "There's over four-hundred people behind you. There's no time for you to be self-conscious." Danderoff looked near tears. "Try on this pair and this large shirt." She thrust the items at the woman and gestured toward the fitting area ( ... )

EDITOR Part Three toxic_apiaceae September 14 2009, 17:26:22 UTC

["You're so full of shit, Stecker." Beringer laughed and shook his head. We inched forward in the line and dropped our voices as we moved closer to the uniform station ( ... )

lieffeil September 19 2009, 04:11:14 UTC

TOXIC ( ... )

lieffeil September 19 2009, 04:13:11 UTC

One last:
I extended my hand to each of them.
(Each of them in turn.)
Don't make the soldierboys share. Not on the first day. It's just cruel.

innana88 September 22 2009, 21:53:44 UTC

Thank you so much for your edit. I have not forgotten about yours. I'm so sorry. I've been sick since Thursday and am now trying to dig myself out of how behind I've gotten as a result of being in bed all weekend. I have much to say about your entry. It was beautiful.