Drabble: Having First Met, Orlando/Elijah

Jan 12, 2010 04:59

I was reading through orlijah_month recently, and among the fine responses to the intriguing prompts there, I discovered a drabble by ladysunrope. In addition to being a stellar example of the form, it seemed to leave room for expansion. When I read the comments on the entry, I saw tweedle_'s remark that the drabble needed a partner from the other person's point of view. Almost ( Read more... )

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randomdarling January 12 2010, 14:22:40 UTC
I like this as much as I liked ladysunrope's! It's lovely. :)

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ainigma January 13 2010, 22:21:40 UTC
That's a very flattering comparison indeed, thank you so much! ::smiles::

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illuins_lair January 12 2010, 14:38:06 UTC
GUH! I loved ladysunrope´s drabble and this just fits perfectly with it, in that dreamy sexy way of what´s going on behind a polite introduction - while instead imagining a first kiss..
Absolutely love this!

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ainigma January 13 2010, 22:26:45 UTC
I loved her drabble, too, so I'm very happy to know mine works for you. There really is something sexy about the inner voice disguised by the polite exterior. A person might have a nice, proper façade, but there can be wild imaginings going on beneath the surface. Thanks very much for your comment!

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tweedle_ January 12 2010, 17:42:36 UTC
A lovely partner to ladysunrope's drabble. Elijah's confidence contrasts to Orlando's nervousness so beautifully. Thanks for joining us! :)

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ainigma January 13 2010, 22:30:34 UTC
I thought hers was lovely, and it made me want to know what was going on from Elijah's side. Your suggestion was just the thing I needed to make me write it. The similarities and contrasts between the two of them really intrigued me. Thanks for your comment and for your help! ::smiles::

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ladysunrope January 12 2010, 22:17:58 UTC
wow -this is perfect and thank you so much for giving us the other 'voice'.
And I adore a confident Elijah so thanks for that too!

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ainigma January 13 2010, 22:36:24 UTC
Your drabble was so wonderful that I couldn't keep an "answer" to myself, so I'm delighted -- and not a little relieved -- that it meets with your approval! And yes, a confident Elijah is not only appealing but credible, and here, he's clearly the experienced one. Thank you so much for giving me the inspiration to write this and for commenting!

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itstonedme January 13 2010, 00:07:44 UTC
Really, a perfect companion drabble to ladysunrope's charming post. Thank you for providing the other bookend.

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ainigma January 13 2010, 22:41:39 UTC
Hers really was charming, so I'm very happy to hear this matches with it. I enjoyed finding the other bookend. ::grins:: Thanks so much for your comment.

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