LaYu Day!!!... er.... late!!!

[ainoche]

Title: Rule-Breaker

Pairing: LavixYuu

Rating: PG13-ish?

Words: 5965

Warnings: Mild yaoi, mention of male parts, very speedy character development, AU, under aged drinking, mild ooc, etc…

Disclaimer: I do not own D.Gray-man.

Summary: Kanda does not want to go to prom. And he really doesn’t want to go to prom with his idiot friend, Lavi,

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[meyham_m2]

“We can leave, Yuu-chan. It’s not like they make you stay.”

Pfft. Not at my prom.

It must have looked like sex when he stepped into the redhead and grinded into his hips

My prom wasn't thiis sexy, either. Isn't it funny how a fictional, made-up prom is actually more appealing than the real thing?

“Did we have sex or something? Because your hair is mad.”

Someone needs to make an icon or demotivational poster of this. Badly.

This. Was. Awesome.

Rly?

[ainoche]

At my prom we could leave as long as we had a ride. No walking home, however.

I sort of based the idea off of what my prom and the other dances were like in high school. Loud, sexy, and rather boring. I don't think any prom could compete with Kanda n' Lavi grindin' on the dance floor though. X3

I would totally use that icon. All the time. As long as it had a big Lavi face on it going :D <3~ and Yuu all >8( with messy hair. Heehee.

Glad you liked it! Thanks for leaving a comment.

[hakasha]

oh, wow. that was an awesome story! I loved the descriptions to bits. And the both of them dancing, and then after the prom... gaaah, so cute. so cute. so cuuuute. *happy sigh* God, that was a nice way of beginning a day. reading this already made up for the possible sucky-ness of today ^^

[ainoche]

The entire time I was writing it, I was whining to my friend Keita that it was too cute. She kept encouraging me, though, so it ended up being written regardless of my doubts. :)

Nose kisses... if you're like me, they make you feel all light and fluffy hours after you read them. :3

I'm glad you liked it! :D

Em2 being a Grammar Nazi

[saxon_jesus]

*melts*

Ok, except for the fact that I couldn't stop thinking about the liver in the fetal pig that I dissected today in my Bio class and that my mind went into beta mode, it was absolutely fantastic! I died laughing so many times, especially when I came across the word fugly. Em1 is a lurker, so naturally, she didn't comment, but she really enjoyed it too. I mean OMG I loved this. Thanks so much for writing.

And meyham, I don't know about your prom, but my prom (and the one this year that I went to as a pity date for my gay friend) was exactly like that. Girls rubbing their asses all in guys' gonads, guys half humping each other, girls hanging off of one another, and loud, nasty rap with the bass booming so loud that the only way you know which song is playing is because the idiots right next to the speaker are "singing" along with it

Re: Em2 being a Grammar Nazi

[ainoche]

I based this off of my experience with proms. And dances, And horny teens in general. :3

Glad you guys liked it. XD I totally had a blast writing it. THIS, you see, is what happens when I'm not writing non-con and angst and fluff so sweet it makes you cry.

Yay~ I was worried I'd skimped the descriptions to make it less late than it was going to be. Sierra Nevada is actually the second largest craft beer in America, falling behind Samuel Adam's. The brewery IS in California (just a few miles out of my hometown) but it's sold all over America. It was even in an episode of Friends once. Yes, I know a lot about this beer because I sell a lot of it at one of the places I work. ^^;

For the record, pale ale is nasty shit. Drink something amber.

I actually noticed a few other typos you didn't, but I don't have time to fix them just yet. Work calls, replies, etc... but I will get around to it, I hope. 8-|

You died? At least you died laughing. But if you died... who's commenting on my ficcage?!?! D:

Re: Em2 being a Grammar Nazi

[saxon_jesus]

Yep. You described them very well. Reminds me of all the "fun" times I had. Well, the proms were fun, but that was simply because my friends were there.

Nope, your descriptions were absolutely lovely. It was very refreshing to read something interesting, as all my free time has been taken up with textbooks. *headdesk* Hmmm, really? I did assume it was based in Cali, though, and Em1 said she knew it was popular in the southwest-ish area. It's not very popular in Ohio, though, and I really don't like beer that much. It's tolerable, should I be forced to drop it down my gullet, but I'd prefer a nice, cool smirnoff, if anything. I'm not much of a drinker, to tell you the truth.

I was really trying to keep myself out of editing mode, so that would probably be why I missed them. It was nice to have my brain (mostly) off. :) That doesn't happen to me often, so I was glad for the chance. Take your time fixing them; we did, after all *eye roll*.

Yes, I died. It is my ghost who is commenting. :D

[ainoche]

Yeah, couple typos I'll have to fix eventually. I'm slow when it comes to already posted things. >.<

And yes, Lavi, being Lavi, has undoubtedly kissed about half of the female population of his school. Well, or like, six of them.

The burnt cat hair idea came from a number of things. Kanda strikes me as a cat person, for one. For two... I once read a fic where Lavi grew cat ears. Maybe it's singed Lavi hair, rather than actual cat hair?

I'm glad you liked it. :3 I'm pretty sure you've read all of my LaviYuu stuff, huh? I'll have to keep an eye out for ya, because repeat readers like that.

[ainoche]

Oooh, I'll have to go read it. Just give me a tad. Life is exploding before my eyes. ^^;

Yeah, Kanda is usually the catboy, which fits, but with the way Lavi is rubbing on his seat, the mental image screamed "Orange cat hair. Yes. I must." So I went back and added it. It's one of those details that I didn't think required a long side-explanation...

Me: I'm pretty sure you've read all my LaviYuu stuff, huh?
You: Hope I haven't missed any ^^;;

I don't think you've read Scold's Bridle, but that has quite a bit of TyKan before there's anything even resembling LaviYuu, so I don't expect you to. But you should know that it's there, just in case you start feeling adventurous or there's just nothing to do one day and you want something angsty. You can find it under the TyKan tag, oddly enough. :3

[tossino]

8DDDDD This was awesome! XDDD I don't really wanna go to a prom if it's like that, though. Ewww. Just nothing for me. :/ I don't get how people can like it. Or maybe I'm just weird. Heh. xP

It's an interesting little take on their relationship too, although I do find it odd that there was no mention of a headache or anything... They drank SIX BEARS EACH, so I was expecting it. Unless there's something special with that beer, because I know nothing of it...

It was great, though. Quite in character, beautiful descriptions and just wonderful writing in general. Awesome work! <333 : D

Slooooow reply~

[ainoche]

I'm glad you liked it! And that's about how my prom was... that's why I went with it. ^^;

Well, Sierra Nevada is bottled in pints. In my experience, about 5 pints gets someone to the drunk state that Lavi was in, but they aren't hung over in the morning. Maybe that's just me though...

I'm happy you liked the descriptions, too! Thanks for the words of encouragement! 8D

Re: Slooooow reply~

[tossino]

It sounds nasty. xD

Ah, I see. Makes sense, then. :>

You're muchly welcome. <3