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colleenish June 5 2011, 21:07:25 UTC
Awwww, I love fierce, defiant, proud Esca, but ... Marcus, oh Marcus. That touch of "little boy lost", and his inherent nobility of spirit, it's just catnip to me, and a good, thoughtful, well-written exploration of his motivations is irresistible.

This is gorgeous in its imagery and detail, and I love the relationship you are slowly building between the boys.

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ainsoph15 June 5 2011, 23:07:37 UTC
Oh, oh, thank you so much! What a lovely, lovely comment ♥ :) I'm so happy you like it, and I'm absolutely overjoyed that you can see that "little boy lost" in Marcus. I see him as being someone who is terrifically competent in his soldiering and as a commander, but emotionally, he's stuck as that manchild who still mourns and misses his father terribly - there's so much unprocessed grief in him.

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anne_squires September 24 2011, 20:32:50 UTC
Finally, it's Saturday which means I can read. I am loving this fic so much!

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