Dis Aliter Visum - Chapter 78 - 2,745 words

[aionwatha]

Note: The transition to the next chapter might be a little awkward...
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Chapter summary: What do you want?

Comments

[nemesisswan]

Mistakes to correct:

"Kuroro led his younger companion to a settee y the large French doors where the blond sat, his back stiff, hoping he looked calmer than he fest."

settee y ??
fest -> felt

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"Kuroro waited patiently behind him the blond"

It must be "him" OR "the blond". ;)

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"His heart thudded nearly painfully in chest"

In HIS chest
(Haven't seen a sentence like that without it)
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"Kuroro had won, and both knew it."

And THEY both knew it.

Feel free to delete this comment after correcting everything. ;)

And thank you for posting two chapters! *hug* I was waiting really impatiently. ;)

[aionwatha]

Thanks for the help!

[hinoai]

Kuroro won.. and that means that we won as well! ;)