Call for Creativity!

Jun 07, 2004 16:50

I'm on vacation, with the house to myself and less than a week left before I have to leave for Charlottesville, and I can't. write. a thing ( Read more... )

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Part 2 airgiodslv June 8 2004, 01:58:26 UTC
He's looking at Dom like this is a reasonable thing to do, and suddenly the bewilderment is gone, replaced by the heat of embarassment and rising anger to cover it. "A ritual?" Dom snarls in disbelief. "You fuck your co-stars as part of a bloody ritual?"

A blush rises in Elijah's cheeks, pink and sharp, but he's quick to defend himself. "It happened on a set once, right before the shoot started, and that film was the best thing that ever happened to me or my career."

Dom stares in complete disbelief. "Are you really that superstitious, Elijah?" he asks, stunned that what meant so much to him apparently means so little to the one he shared it with ( ... )

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Re: Part 2 rodneyscat June 8 2004, 02:55:35 UTC
Oh!

I thought you'd written 2 ficlets, so I read the first, gave feedback and moved to the second and that one is in fact the continuation of the 'first'! But in a way you've written both my requests in one fic... it gives some twists to the first bit, makes Dom less adorable, because damn, he cheated on Billy! And even if it was just a one night stand, Dom is still special to Elijah, he didn't just pick anyone as his lucky charm.

Very subtle these shifts and very typically you to write these guys so real, so complex and show so much in so little words.

Thank you!

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Re: Part 2 airgiodslv June 12 2004, 22:18:29 UTC
Dom did cheat on Billy! And without knowing for certain where it would go after that. So no, neither of them are blameless. They both have good and bad. I tried to have Elijah saying that he would have picked someone else, originally, but he was adamant that it be Dom. So there you go. Twisted love story.

Thank you so much for all of your support and assistance! <3

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Re: Part 2 queenofalostart June 11 2004, 06:46:10 UTC
"If I had, I...well, you were the one I wanted."

Ohhhh, I want to throttle Lij. And not in a good way.

These are all lovely little ficlets, darling.

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Re: Part 2 airgiodslv June 12 2004, 22:21:56 UTC
Well, he's made his bed. And Dom chose to lie in it. I want to throttle both of them, really. Communication, boyos!

Thank you, dearheart. I appreciate the comments!

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