B-T Fic, Rough Draft Chapter One

[airian_reesu]

Here's the first chapter. It's not the edited polished version...but I don't think I'll ever get it there. *laughs* I don't have the patience. But it's cleaned up enough to be read, so here you go. ^^

I have no title yet... Because I suck at them. xDDD

I was inspired by pianolessdevil's recent B-T fic. This story won't be horror, not really

Comments

[ladymusashi]

I LOVE IT! ALL OF IT! WELL DONE! Imai is soooo cute drunk! Ah, comedy, mystery, romance... More, more!

I think I found one typo though:

It's what we do now what we're dead.

I think you meant that.

I'll be 'patiently' wait for more. XDDD

[airian_reesu]

*giggle* You know, I fixed the "now" in that same line before posting? It used to be "not". Guess I can only do one correction in a line at one time. xDDD I must have been very tired typing that line. ^^

You think Imai's a cute drunk? Wait until you see the next chapter...

Glad you liked it. ^^

[ladymusashi]

Wait until you see the next chapter...

Don't tease, go and write. XDDD

[airian_reesu]

...I never even thought of 'love letter'. lol!

I hope to finish chapter two soon. ^^

[elvenlass]

That's really good! Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

I knew Imai'd be a cute drunk! LOL

[airian_reesu]

Well, they all say he gets more open as a drunk, so.. ^^

[dollsoflace]

well now, I have something to read.

I am venturing into a genre that I usually don't read -- well the supernatural part yes -- the boy/boy infatuation, no.

But it's Atsushi... in '93... with long hair ---- I'm in. xD

[airian_reesu]

Icon &hearts!

...what boy/boy infatuation? *cough*

I'm glad you're giving it a try. ^^

[dollsoflace]

pfft don't believe my innocent look one bit... I was a Gravitation fangirl for like one month and then Descendants of Darkness followed.

*smile* A good story is good no matter what =) I don't flame either. If I think an opinion would help, I give it but never intrude into being like "grammar this or that."

I'm excited for this.

[airian_reesu]

lol! I wasn't saying I don't believe you like man/man (yaoi fits for anime, but not really for...well...this. Maybe I should say slash instead...) I was joking because ladymusashi keeps saying my stories are Imai/Atsushi and I keep denying it... >_>.... It's been an ongoing theme with us. ^^

Well, I'm sure there are spelling and grammar errors in this baby somewhere, but you know what? I don't care. Because if I did this thing would never get up on the internet, and then we would all be bereft. *laugh* I'm joking, of course. ^^

[shikamu]

Oh hai tharr!
This is officially the first BT fanfic I've ever read. -fanfares-

I'm not much into supernatural stuff and Yami no Matsuei bored me to death -cough- so I was a bit reluctant about this piece at the beginning, and I even gave up reading in the middle, but then after 3 hours I decided that I absolutely need to know what happens next and came back to it. Yay.

What more can I say? It's quite enjoyable, funny, well written, contains a lot of Atsushi and Imai in awkward if not slightly erotic situations... good stuff, good stuff :3

I wanted to read some BT fanfiction for quite some time now but I was too lazy to search for et. I'm glad I stumbled upon this during my journeys through random LJ journals.

[airian_reesu]

Hi!

There isn't much B-T fiction out there actually. I know of a few things (quality differs between them). pianolessdevilwrites some good stuff, but I'm not sure if it's friends-locked or not.

Well, this story is more character based than situation based. I'm not going to focus to much on the supernatural so much as the *reaction* to the situation.

I hope you continue to enjoy it. It's on hiatus now since I'm studying in Japan for six weeks. But I think there are six chapters done already? Just go to the fic tag.