As for the letter, well, it wasn't that bad, but it fit the atmosphere well. And yes, I like how you used real-life material.
I have to say, although I liked your previous fics as well, I think it was good idea not to write this one from Imai's POV. Because, the character you've started to create here is fantastic. Although he's drunk, I can totally imagine him sober as well. Now, let's see what happens in the morning. Imai is on the road to terrible hangover. *giggles*
Yeah, the letter wasn't *that* creepy in a literary sense... but could you imagine *getting* one? ^__^ And he didn't read the whole thing, so *I* don't even know how far it went...
This one will most likely be from multiple POVs, but I thought... well, since *Atsushi* is the main...well, protagonist, then I might as well write from his POV. I thought he'd be hard...but he isn't in this fic, yet.
Writing about self-loathing is difficult, especially a celebrity's POV. But I do believe that you are the kind of fan whom looks a little deeper and can "see" the face behind the make-up, as it were.
*eyes close* He was so tormented. You chose a perfect time.
I have many things to say regarding him, but again, I think I already see too much.
Great job with the emotion laced with the words. =)
I would read fanfiction more often if it weren't for it. Actually I serve as editor of one of my friends, so I've been in that "eyes closed" editing. Gackt is in her story and he's also an extremely (times five) hard person to read about... and I am the one whom writes in most of his parts.
So difficult.
I get a real emotion from your story so that must mean you're doing wonderfully with the mood and tone. Then again, I always pegged you as a deep person. =)
This will sound weird, but, if I ever needed someone to deliver Atsushi "the message" you would be it. You would have the sincerity and caress to deliver.
I don't know if you are even active on LJ anymore but I went way back in the jrock yaoi tags while looking for BUCK-TICK fics as I had this odd dream about Atsushi last week...
I'm immediately captivated by this one and I love how you wrote him in this chapter. It makes me so sad to know that Atsushi is so insecure but you captured him so well.
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Eyebaaaaaall.... *cheesy creepy music* I should have him send some in a box. lol! (I'm totally joking...at least right now. xD)
Gotta get chapter 3 started...
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As for the letter, well, it wasn't that bad, but it fit the atmosphere well. And yes, I like how you used real-life material.
I have to say, although I liked your previous fics as well, I think it was good idea not to write this one from Imai's POV. Because, the character you've started to create here is fantastic. Although he's drunk, I can totally imagine him sober as well. Now, let's see what happens in the morning. Imai is on the road to terrible hangover. *giggles*
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Yeah, the letter wasn't *that* creepy in a literary sense... but could you imagine *getting* one? ^__^ And he didn't read the whole thing, so *I* don't even know how far it went...
This one will most likely be from multiple POVs, but I thought... well, since *Atsushi* is the main...well, protagonist, then I might as well write from his POV. I thought he'd be hard...but he isn't in this fic, yet.
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Ya just gotta love Imai - the crazy monkey!! I can just picture that! LOL
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I'm glad you liked it. ^^
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*eyes close* He was so tormented. You chose a perfect time.
I have many things to say regarding him, but again, I think I already see too much.
Great job with the emotion laced with the words. =)
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It's gotta be hard for you to read fanfiction, huh?
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So difficult.
I get a real emotion from your story so that must mean you're doing wonderfully with the mood and tone. Then again, I always pegged you as a deep person. =)
This will sound weird, but, if I ever needed someone to deliver Atsushi "the message" you would be it. You would have the sincerity and caress to deliver.
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Thank you. I'm happy that your getting something out of my writing. That's always a nice thing to hear. ^^
Well...it will also help that I can "speak" Japanese too. *giggle* (But in all sincerity, thank you.)
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I'm immediately captivated by this one and I love how you wrote him in this chapter. It makes me so sad to know that Atsushi is so insecure but you captured him so well.
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