Chapter Nine, Part Two

[airian_reesu]

OMG. 25 pages

Comments

[ladymusashi]

Girl, I really love the way you write. And I like my stories long.

I love the way you reflected Sakurai's feelings (even if unrealized yet) for Imai through his interaction with Adam. Adam is a cutie (the part about his death was touching and his crush on Sakurai is described well), but Makino seems to be an asshole. A big one in fact.

I like Atsushi's random thoughts about the band members and the way he describes why they do what they do as well as his thoughts about fans. In fact, I don't think it's very far from the truth. ^^

*waits oh-not-so patiently for next installment*

[airian_reesu]

Thank you. ^^ Although I'm sure some people think my thought-process writing is a bit odd... but it's just something that developed natrually for me over the years

[airian_reesu]

Enjoy. ^__^

[airian_reesu]

I'm glad you liked it! It was hard to write.... I guess the struggle paid off!

Well, have you ever just been SO angry....and then it just dies...? That's what I was going for... and it seems you got it. ^^

Well, to use the old cliche...actions speak louder than words. And that's very very true for writing... because you could have a whole scene without dialogue if necessary...

Actually, to be honest, I felt shaky after writing that last part of this chapter! I have the power to affect myself...

I was hoping someone would spew. xDD (You know that kind of stuff has to go on with them... lol!)

[elvenlass]

Absolutely marvelous!!!!!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!!!!!

More please?

[airian_reesu]

I'm glad you liked it. ^^

Of course. ^^

[shikamu]

I just downloaded it on my pendrive, will take it home, read and then most probably share my thoughts. Already can't wait to dig my teeth into it ^^

[jenbowie]

Like I said, catching up....good stuff. I like the way you write. I should almost be caught up now. :D