Chapter Ten

Oct 18, 2008 01:43

WARNING! Don’t read this if you aren’t okay with m/m. Or with the idea of playing with someone’s sexual preferences… (by now these characters that I’m writing about have become abstracted from their sources in my mind, so it was much easier to do this part ( Read more... )

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airian_reesu October 18 2008, 15:12:34 UTC
Well, you say stupid stuff when you're wasted. xDD

Well...you kinda *are* in drunken-Imai's head at the time. ^^

...Another idea. Oh no.... xD

I'm glad you were able to enjoy it... ^__^

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elvenlass October 18 2008, 07:20:42 UTC
Whoa, nice chapter!!!! *runs off to have cold shower* Can't wait to see what happens next.

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airian_reesu October 18 2008, 15:12:57 UTC
Glad you liked it. ^__^

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ladymusashi October 18 2008, 09:34:27 UTC
Ah, the humor, the smut... Me likes. XDDD

Anyway, I really get a kick out of m/m action. But, you already knew that. *laughs* My psychologist friend tried to explain me the reasons why straight women enjoy it so much, but I was like... please, I don't need the explanation, don't spoil it for me. *laughs* And as someone who have read a ton of these stories (ff or original), I can say - you are good. Subtle writing, which is good, especially for this story, but still hot. Imai is really cute (I loved the shoes part), although I never imagined him as a top. XDDD

You really are good at this. You should write something original (as in not fan fiction) and try to publish it. Something short for a start. I really think you should. At least show it to your aunt, she's a pro.

Can't wait for more.

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airian_reesu October 18 2008, 15:19:38 UTC
don't spoil it for me LOL! xDD ( ... )

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jenbowie October 18 2008, 17:36:26 UTC
Just slowly catching up on the writing. Good stuff! ^^
Ah, to have an Astushi to frot.

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airian_reesu October 18 2008, 20:42:52 UTC
L.O.L. Why am I not surprised to see someone new pop up in the smut chapter? xDD (I'm teasing. ^^)

There's actually a lot to read in this so far....gotta be hard to catch up on... (I'm glad you like it so far though.)

Ah, if you had one of those Lorikslady would feel lonely....T_T

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jenbowie October 19 2008, 01:04:19 UTC
Well, it does take me a while to catch up sometimes as you've seen XP

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shikamu October 20 2008, 11:24:56 UTC
Oh oh oh oh OHHHHHHHHH HELL YEAH BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now that's really starting to get interesting!!!

I'm gonna have to re-read it in peace one day, but hell, you did a great job on this one.

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anne_sama December 30 2008, 03:15:17 UTC
owww
I finally could read this chapter! It was wonderful! It was wonderful!

I want 11° chapter nowww! ;___;

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airian_reesu December 30 2008, 03:21:58 UTC
Sorry, I forgot to make them public. I'm up to chapter 13 now. I opened them up so you can read them. ^__^

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