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charliebnim May 14 2013, 15:52:14 UTC
MY FEELS ARE OVER THE TOP! THANK YOU <3

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charliebnim May 14 2013, 15:52:52 UTC
and god dammit ! i love ChenLu <3

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byunbaekhyun May 14 2013, 17:52:50 UTC
There's a typo in the second to the last section (dumfounded) :P

Other than that, this story is perfect! Ugh. All my feels for krisbaek and first kisses! Ugh. I just. Ugh.

I don't think there's crack in here though? /wraps self in fluff and rolls all over the floor with it/

P.S.
You write so well, I'm jel. /sobs in a corner/

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airplanewishes May 15 2013, 08:35:38 UTC
Where? >_

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byunbaekhyun May 15 2013, 12:24:25 UTC
Baekhyun sighs, plainly dumfounded that Kris still does after what he’s said. “So sweet and gentlemanly, but cheesy,” he says, taking a step forward and reaching up to brush Kris’ hair away from his eyes, like he’s always done. “How does someone like you still exist?”

There. :P

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galbijiim May 15 2013, 10:09:32 UTC
THIS WAS SO CUTE T__________T /runs and hugs you or something

ahhh I needed this sort of fic bc I've been so down lately and this was just all the adorables and awkwardness and guh their first kissess sobs

omg the luchen

omg I like all the snippets of this world we see? LIKE SEHUN? AND JONGIN? AND CHANYEOL? MYSTERIOUS CHANYEOL LOL OMG IM NOT A CHANYEOL STAN

but this was so cute and I loved how it played out and nerdy awkward romantic kris makes my day anyday <33333

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airplanewishes May 20 2013, 10:57:24 UTC
/catches you and twirls you around

I'm glad this helped. I hope you're feeling better. /huggles you

Hehehe the LuChen sort of just happened as with a lot of things EXO.

I tried to keep it focused on Kris and Baekhyun as much as I can. I really liked Jongin here btw, not to sound self-serving or anything like that. I just like the idea that he's this really popular and handsome kid with a douche as a best friend and yet he remains to be one of the nicest guys in school. :D Lol at Chanyeol. No words. (You may secretly be a Chanyeol stan.) ;)

Thank you for reading! <333

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zhonqda May 15 2013, 10:39:47 UTC
first time reading this pairing but omg this is qt. <3 and ofc sehun will be the one spreading rumors tsk tsk what a brat.

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airplanewishes May 20 2013, 10:57:58 UTC
I hope you like them more. :D Hehehe I couldn't help but put Sehun in that position.

Thank you for reading! :D

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g_odalisque13 May 15 2013, 10:57:15 UTC
the baekris!!!!! :D
i read this today while i was out and about :)
this was so sweet!!!
kris being all unsure and outwardly-badass-but-secretly-just-adorable!baekhyun <3
the way he acted differently around kris was shown so well and it was so cute
and thinking back to the beginning-ish when baekhyun was talking about first kisses and how it should be something you give, it just makes it even sweeter that kris was his first kiss since it obviously meant a lot to him too :')
loved this so much!

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airplanewishes May 20 2013, 11:00:03 UTC
Yes it's finally out!! :D
Lmao that's so cute.
I'm so happy you liked this. I like making Kris all awkward and unsure of himself. And Baekhyun. I just really like Baekhyun all cute and adorable and squishable. :P
Aww I'm glad you thought so. I really wanted it to be different because he's so shy about who he really is.
Thank you for reading!!!

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