Summary: The Uchiha Family Circus was the most famous traveling circus in the world. On his first visit there Naruto meets someone who affects him the rest of his life.
loove this! thank you for writing for naruto, and especially narusasu, again :))
you capture the atmosphere of a circus well, I can feel the crowded, colorful, happy life of circus. Almost makes me want to be in that kind of circus, lol. (or at least watch sasuke perform. that'd be awesomee.)
also, loving the characters are in character, by the way they speak and behave. plus liking the detail like how Naru and sasu meet at a very young age and both lost their parents when they're young so they share the same experience.
I wonder how does sasuke's new costume look like? (I imagine it like a nightwing costume, lol) Must be a verrryyy tight one that makes naruto takes his breath away, lol.
couldn't wait to read more~! (and sorry for blabbering) >.<
Oh my goodness thank you so much!:) I'm so happy you enjoyed it and I was very happy I was able to convey the feel of the circus.
Thank you for saying that I was able to keep them in character. I haven't quite caught up with everything in the manga or anime so I was afraid I would be way off after nearly 4 years.
Yea, Nightwing would be a good comparison lol! You know I never really thought of it before, I just knew I wanted it to be a tight blue sparkly unitard (there's more on that in the next part) Don't worry about the sparkly parts, I work with costumes for theater and you need a lot of flash so something can be visible to the audience... if that makes sense.
Anyway, now I'm rambling haha. Thank you for the review and don't worry about blabbering, those are my favorite kinds of reviews :)
Landscaping Day was one of the first fics I read when I got sucked into this fandom, so I'm inwardly flailing it's really nice to see you're writing again.
But how fun is this? It's such a neat idea for an AU. I really like the setup and the development of their friendship, all those little moments between them and their ease around each other. Not to mention kid!fic done well is never a bad thing.
Wow! How cool! I thought your name looked familiar and it's because I put it on my 'to read' list. Your writing is awesome!
Haha sorry for my little fangirl moment there. I'm so flattered that you liked this and Landscaping Day! (Though I'm a bit embarrassed since this is an unedited piece that could use some trimming.) I'm glad you liked the idea of the glimpses of them growing up together, it was really fun to do.
Thank you so so much for your lovely comment, it put a huge smile on my face! :D
Haha yes, Shawn and Gus are the epitome of Bromance for me. I love that show! Well I did, I admit I haven't watched in a while since *spoilers* --> . . . . . . . . .
Shules... I liked my bromance and usually when they involve a girl it becomes all about the relationship, mama's not ready for Shules heavy episdoes XD, unpopular opinion I'm sure. I am too scared to see what they did so I missed the last season.
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you capture the atmosphere of a circus well, I can feel the crowded, colorful, happy life of circus. Almost makes me want to be in that kind of circus, lol. (or at least watch sasuke perform. that'd be awesomee.)
also, loving the characters are in character, by the way they speak and behave. plus liking the detail like how Naru and sasu meet at a very young age and both lost their parents when they're young so they share the same experience.
I wonder how does sasuke's new costume look like? (I imagine it like a nightwing costume, lol) Must be a verrryyy tight one that makes naruto takes his breath away, lol.
couldn't wait to read more~! (and sorry for blabbering) >.<
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Thank you for saying that I was able to keep them in character. I haven't quite caught up with everything in the manga or anime so I was afraid I would be way off after nearly 4 years.
Yea, Nightwing would be a good comparison lol! You know I never really thought of it before, I just knew I wanted it to be a tight blue sparkly unitard (there's more on that in the next part) Don't worry about the sparkly parts, I work with costumes for theater and you need a lot of flash so something can be visible to the audience... if that makes sense.
Anyway, now I'm rambling haha. Thank you for the review and don't worry about blabbering, those are my favorite kinds of reviews :)
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But how fun is this? It's such a neat idea for an AU. I really like the setup and the development of their friendship, all those little moments between them and their ease around each other. Not to mention kid!fic done well is never a bad thing.
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Haha sorry for my little fangirl moment there. I'm so flattered that you liked this and Landscaping Day! (Though I'm a bit embarrassed since this is an unedited piece that could use some trimming.) I'm glad you liked the idea of the glimpses of them growing up together, it was really fun to do.
Thank you so so much for your lovely comment, it put a huge smile on my face! :D
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Ah, thank you. ^^;; It's more than mutual, very much so, but you definitely have nothing to be embarrassed about. :)
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Shules... I liked my bromance and usually when they involve a girl it becomes all about the relationship, mama's not ready for Shules heavy episdoes XD, unpopular opinion I'm sure. I am too scared to see what they did so I missed the last season.
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