Myths

[aisling87]

I had even less time this week.  Hopefully I'll get to edit this, but if not at least here's something.

Comments

[drippedonpaper]

Actually, I really like this. I really like how you tie it together...and I love the idea of the whisper. Will you continue this story sometime? If so, let me know!

I feel awkward around the elderly too (and wish I didn't)

Intriguing entry!

Keep writing!

[aisling87]

Thank you for reading and commenting! I had originally intended this to be longer, although I'm not exactly sure the direction it would have taken. I do like what came out, but I definitely think it wants to breathe and be a longer piece ... I just don't know when I'll have time to work on it. :-S

[cedarwolfsinger]

Sweetie, this is creepy but really cool. I would like to see it fleshed out... Good work, good luck with it!

[aisling87]

:) I'm glad you liked it. I would like to see it fleshed out too ... I just have to figure out what that means ...

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[attentionhoard]

Wow. I am so proud of you! This piece is fantastic. This is lyrical mastery at it's finest. By far my favorite piece of yours and, I- wow. I'm just at a loss for words. I love it so incredibly much.

I have to get you writing some plays. Your play with language and images is startling and complex. You provoke thoughts and you tell great stories! Nice work.

Now collaborate with me or give me some of that talent. One or the other ;-)

[aisling87]

*blush blush blush blush*

You are far, far too kind, but thank you for making me feel good all the same.

I had a playwrighting class last semester, and despite having a really good teacher I was feeling a bit uninspired and got pretty frustrated with myself. Now after the class is done I have the skeleton of an idea for a new one, so we'll see how that turns out ...

Again, thank you for your read and kind words. It's always great to hear from you! :)