SPN - Ring of Fire

[ajcaddick]

I wrote this a few months ago for a challenge but never published it because I'm a coward. In all honesty, I was glad I didn't because the prompt was heat and everyone else wrote smutty romance stories... and this... well this is about as far from smut as one can get. It's not finished yet but I'm hoping this might give me a kick up the arse to get

Comments

[calcium77]

I don't care what you say. I liked it. But then I am such a hopeless fangirl of yours who knows if my opinion is worthy? I did like it though....and I wanted more immediately.

I hope Dean was not wearing his leather jacket. Hate to see him loose that one.

[ajcaddick]

Lol, you're far too kind to me. Seriously, I think I was high on sugar or something when I wrote this, and I was a total coward about not posting it on the challenge. And you can't say things like you're a fangirl. You'll make me blush and I'm a red head and when I blush I can illuminate towns. It's not pretty. :)

[mlebayre]

Hey, this is neat. I liked it too. Fire breathing chicken, sure didn't see that coming...hehehehe

Great idea!

Laura

[ajcaddick]

You, too, are too kind. Well, I had to encorporate the word heat, and I didn't want to do Sam/Dean trapped in a blazing heat. Although, with hindsight, it might have worked better. Nowt wrong with a little crack!Fic now and again, hey? ;)

[kokoda2007]

When I saw part 1/2, I wanted to resist, knowing you'd leave a cliff-hanger, but here I am. Yes, I'm weak with no will-power.

“I know what I’m doing, Dean.” This line really sounded so exactly like an irritated Sam, and I have to say, you write his "pissed off" voice absolutely perfectly.

Please more. I'm asking nicely :)

[ajcaddick]

Ok, so I'm not crazy. This makes me feel definitely better. I really did think this story was whack. Although the basan is an actual legendary creature :D

:) More will be coming. I'm currently kicking my muse's butt all around my house. :)

Thanks for the comment :)

[csidemosthenes]

ROFLLOL.

A FLAME THROWING CHICKEN?!!!

No, seriously...I really did like it, but-

A FLAME THROWING CHICKEN!!! :D

[ajcaddick]

Lmfao. Yeah... I know, I know. I have a screw loose. :D

[maxandkiz]

That was awesome! A flame throwing chicken! LOL! That has got to be one of the funniest things they've faced. It's right up there with the depressed teddy bear.
Can't wait to see how the boys get themselves out of this mess. :)

Lisa

[ajcaddick]

Lmfao, I think the depressed teddy bear might have beat a fire-breathing chicken! That episode was so funny :)

[maxandkiz]

That sounds like one of those Vs. movies. Instead of Freddie Vs. Jason, it's Teddy Vs. Chicken! LOL!