Comments | ajjha: Fic: Choices Made

ajjha

Fic: Choices Made - A Short Story

Jun 27, 2011 12:07

( Choices Made )

puck, ajjha, rachel, puckelberry, rachel/puck, fanfiction

Comments 10

uniquegrl7 June 27 2011, 17:49:12 UTC

I loved this.

ajjha June 30 2011, 17:57:30 UTC

Thank you so much for the positive feedback! I'm slowly getting into this Glee fic stuff. ;-)

meagan4dominic June 27 2011, 21:13:49 UTC

I loved the way you portrayed Jesse, totally realistic!

ajjha June 30 2011, 17:56:52 UTC

Yep, I have a love/hate relationship with Jesse but I could totally see him doing that.

loyal_fan23 June 28 2011, 19:08:17 UTC

This was so good. Heart-breaking to read Rachel so broken, but I like to think that the way you wrote it, with Noah there for her, is how it would be. Great job.

ajjha June 30 2011, 17:56:26 UTC

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback and support!

lita_cena425 June 29 2011, 06:25:33 UTC

I really enjoyed this. I think Noah would be incredibly selfless to the point of his own unhappiness. I think Rachel would force something to work until she can't anymore and stop caring. I think Jesse would be the one who would want Rachel so much and then decides she's not worth it and look elsewhere. Very realistic portrayals of the characters, IMO. Thanks for sharing.

ajjha June 30 2011, 17:55:32 UTC

Thank you! I'm still trying to get used to writing their personalities so that is a great compliment.

hiddenmoonlyt June 29 2011, 20:27:06 UTC

This = LOVE

ajjha June 30 2011, 17:54:59 UTC

Glad you loved it! I enjoyed writing it.