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ajjha

Fic: Revelations (Part Two) - A Short Story

Jul 02, 2011 18:33

Her words jolt him back to reality. He’s confused at first but then remembers Shue’s question. Where does he want to be in ten years? He leans back into the chair and contemplates how to answer.

Closing his eyes, he takes a deep breath. She trusts him so he will trust her. “Out of Lima. Writing music and strumming my guitar. Maybe singing ( Read more... )

puck, glee, ajjha, rachel, puckelberry, rachel/puck, fanfiction

Comments 24

enchantedrose80 July 3 2011, 02:06:25 UTC

I'm not sure if I've read one of yours yet, so I want to say that this was very well done and an entertaining read.

I love how it all progressed, and I especially loved the end and how Mr Schue was the one that got them together.

ajjha July 3 2011, 02:16:23 UTC

Yeah I'm fairly new to the Glee fic game....I've wrote fanfics before but not Glee and have been out of practice with all of them until I started watching this show. I've become obsessed with the drabble meme threads and I'm loaded with inspiration now (which was lacking before). Now if I could only find enough time to write what I want. So thank you for commenting and I'm glad you liked it!

sarcastic_fina July 3 2011, 02:25:23 UTC

This. was. EPIC. It was so wonderful to see it progress and how they came together. I love it. I was smiling like crazy in the end! Such a wonderful fill!!!

ajjha July 3 2011, 02:33:23 UTC

So glad you liked it! I've adored everything I've read of yours. Your talent is very much an inspiration to me. I also think you post some pretty awesome prompts!

kinseyjo July 3 2011, 02:31:14 UTC

DUDE. you always get me in the last couple lines! I can totally see the picture in my head - so sweet! Loved it.

ajjha July 3 2011, 02:35:21 UTC

It was actually that picture that was stuck in my head from the time I decided to base it on the OTH assignment episode. I toyed with pic ideas for a few minutes but once I thought of that one, I was SOLD!

Thanks so much for the kind words!

storywriter84 July 3 2011, 02:48:02 UTC

What a great picture at the end. That would be great to see. Great story.

ajjha July 3 2011, 02:52:49 UTC

I would have loved to actually been able to fake that picture but I'm not talented like that. Glad you liked the story though!

blackgem88 July 3 2011, 05:23:26 UTC

This was fantastic.