Fic: Revelations (Part Two) - A Short Story

[ajjha]

Her words jolt him back to reality.  He’s confused at first but then remembers Shue’s question.  Where does he want to be in ten years?  He leans back into the chair and contemplates how to answer.

Closing his eyes, he takes a deep breath.  She trusts him so he will trust her.  “Out of Lima.  Writing music and strumming my guitar.  Maybe singing

Comments

[anemone_pirate]

Ahh love it, love it, LOVE IT!

This story actually inspired me to incorporate the last part into the P/R graphic I was working on.

[ajjha]

That's awesome!

[anemone_pirate]

Well I thought this story was awesome, keep it up!

Here's a rough copy for the graphic, just thought I'd share it with you...

[misfit_heart]

Oh my God. This is fantastically fantastic. <3

[misfit_heart]

YES. That's all I have to say I think... is just... YES. I love this. I do. And that's all I can really think to comment.

[wondering]

Awww this was beautiful! I may have teared up a little, haha. I love the OTH connection for the assignment :)

[loyal_fan23]

Truly adorable. I loved it all, but I especially loved Puck telling her how much better she was without Finn; he treats her terribly and makers her change herself when she's perfect the way she is. Noah can not only handle her own brand of crazy, but he appreciates it. Thanks!

[restless_faery]

Very interesting and entertaining read. It was very well written and I liked the way it progressed.

I really liked the way you captured who both Rachel and Puck are, the emotions you conveyed clearly and how your writing in general just drew me in and had me wanting more.

This is one of my fav Rachel/Puck fics.