Comments | akage_oribia22: KyuMin ♥ - A half empty cup of coffee, messy hair, a pair of shoes and some elevator doors -

akage_oribia22

KyuMin ♥ - A half empty cup of coffee, messy hair, a pair of shoes and some elevator doors -

May 29, 2011 20:14

KyuMin ♥ - A half empty cup of coffee, messy hair, a pair of shoes and some elevator doors -
One shot.
748 words. It's short!
PG~

A/N: It's cute and I felt like it. ^^ (I hope there are no mistakes!)

( He holds the cup like he thinks there will be more warmth from the thing itself then the liquid in it. )

short, kyumin, sungmin, kyuhyun, one shot

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momonyappy89 May 30 2011, 00:30:57 UTC

Bwahaha, Sungmin why so violent? XD
Kyuhyun is so sweet~♥

That was so cute ^^ and it's not short, short would be like, a 200-word drabble or something :P

akage_oribia22 May 30 2011, 00:42:53 UTC

I could just see him smack Kyu~ Like *whack* I would have! XDDD Violent Sungmin is an awesome Sungmin! XD
Teehee for Kyu~ 8D
THANK YOU FOR READINGUH. lol ♥ ILU.

Yah, well under 1000 words for me will always be short :| But if you say so, then it is! :D

arisa_fubuki June 7 2011, 01:19:32 UTC

Awww~ *-*
I love how you described Sungmin at the beginning!

And this part is sooo cute ^^
“Thanks.”
“For?” I say, struggling as I get in with everybody else chit-chatting behind me, Sungmin coming to stand in front of me.
“For giving me two more minutes.”

<3

akage_oribia22 June 7 2011, 02:02:13 UTC

eeeeheeeeheeee~ *giggles and dances* I have theeee biggest smile right now~

I LOVE YOU AND THANK YOU!!!!!! 8D

mypinksmile August 3 2011, 08:32:00 UTC

OMG This is cute and sweet!! haha Min smacked Kyuu LOL

akage_oribia22 August 3 2011, 23:07:32 UTC

You have no idea the face of utter joy and surprise I made at seeing that someone had commented on this! >< ♥ And therefore, had read it! Thank youuuu~ It has made me very happy!

Im glad that you found it funny~ :3 I was aiming for that XD Im also happy that the cute-factor came across well~ KyuMin is so sweet~ looool

~♥~

mypinksmile August 4 2011, 09:13:56 UTC

haha i think i have a vague idea, cuz i feel dat too!!! :)) i'm not a regular writer... ahem actually i've only properly written 2 before, i'm quite lazy XD then i was super duper happy when someone commented!! :))

yes it's soooo sweet at d start, n then d ending is soooo cute and funny!!!!

haha forgive me i think i'm crazy right now!! DID YOU SEE THE MV????????? OMG ASDFGHJKL *incoherent* OMG I'M BREATHLESS

hehe lol fangirl attack XD
hwaiting!! ur fic is really nice :)

akage_oribia22 August 5 2011, 04:34:52 UTC

*fangirl attack back at ya* YES I SAW THE MV AND OMG. O M G. I stayed up till 2 am to watch and man oh man did I not regret that choice! IT IS/WAS AMAZING AND PERFECT AND ALL TEN OF THEM ARE FLAWLESS. UDHFAUHSEIGHSIGEJRWG8RSGSJRIGJSDKG KEYSMASH IS THE BEST WAY TO EXPRESS YOURSELF! DIGJSIDGJDIFHJDPIHJDFHPODJFHPODHJDPR DUGHSUEGHSUDHGIDGSECTE *derp* :3

-lol yes, comments are always loved XD I dont write much too so... Though I wish I did~

Can I add you as a friend? You seem like an awesome person~~~ :D

Thank you once more~ :)

♥

PS, where do you live? So I can stalk you. LMAO Joking. Im juz curious~

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