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[akai_o]

Symphony between a cat and a bird

Title: Beating this young tree down

Beating this young tree down

Practice took up all morning. A hit over the eyebrow that hadn’t seemed so bad at first, was now bleeding. That was when he had suggested a break. From the position of the sun in the sky he guessed that it was high noon. The wind here in the mountains

Comments

[nagi_xiii]

Hmmm...very original and interesting.

[akai_o]

Thank you, I try to make things interesting, even though on second thought it needs some polishing

[koufu]

its like a poem,but a story. i loved it, it makes you think. hope u write more because i love ginxkira.

[akai_o]

Thanks, I love ginxkira too, i am trying to make them some justice.

[letainajup]

This is very nice, it is different like a poem (just as Koufu says). I like the nice little time Gin and Kira were spending with each other and how Gin mentions his tree could be a fox in disguise! lol good job!

[akai_o]

thankth^_~. Actually the fox tree was a bit of an unintentional reference to a medieval fox tree folk tale. I read a long time ago a story about a samurai and his assistant I think, returning from hunting and noticing an old tree. The assistant marveled it, but the samurai shot an arrow at it. The next day they passed there was a dead fox. One of them, I don't remember who, felt pity for the poor fox. I didn't start the story by knowing that Gin would say something about a fox, but when it came to him it suddenly popped out, lol.

[letainajup]

WOW that's actually pretty cool where you got that from, I like hearing folk tales like that! >_< It is pretty neat how things work out