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akaipenguin

Miracle Doctor

Feb 28, 2013 13:24

Title: Miracle Doctor
Pairings: Zelo centric, Banghim, Kiwoon
Summary: there was only one doctor who could cure his sister.
Warnings: Youngjae is a lady~
Notes: it moves from third person point of view to Zelo centric

( Shut up. )

# banghim, rating ; g, # kiwoon

Comments 6

blackheart_lies February 28 2013, 14:37:12 UTC

Awh.
Cute! I mean, the story is sad but there is so much love in it :) It makes for a very cute story.

akaipenguin March 2 2013, 03:36:28 UTC

Really?? there's a lot of love in it??? I didn't know... TBH I just wrote what ever came to mind~ :/

Anyways, THANKS FOR ALWAYS READING AND COMMENTING!!! :DDDDD

volatileflame February 28 2013, 16:04:16 UTC

this was a very touching story, and i really love your portrayal of zelo. i also agree with the first comment ~ there's a lot of love in this story. to love is to be open to suffering, so great job :)

one thing though, you may want to change the illness from leukemia to simply a congenital heart defect. leukemia can't be cured by a heart transplant. it's an entirely different illness that requires entirely different treatment. the congenital heart defect will make a lot more sense with what you're going with.

akaipenguin March 2 2013, 03:39:33 UTC

Awwwwww THANKIEEEESSSS!!!! ;wwwwwww; I feel honored to have written something to your liking!! ^^

AND YES. I SHALL CHANGE IT NOW!!! i kind of just added what came to mind and well.... Biology and all these medical stuff was never my topic SO THANKKKK YOUUUUU!!!! I SHALL ILLEGALLY COPY AND PASTE YOUR WORDS INTO MY FIC :DDDDDD <33333

THANKS FOR READING AND COMMENTING!!! <3

flowerymisha February 28 2013, 16:48:05 UTC

baby P is always awesome at word vomit...your stories are always long and breathtaking. naturally talented <3 I never approve in genderswitch but yea...girl!youngjae is awright. at least he, I mean she's still dating Daehyun happily ever after <3 slight KiWoon is forever adorable.

love you <3

akaipenguin March 2 2013, 03:43:05 UTC

;wwwww; UNNIIIIEEEEEEE!!!!! HIIIIIII!!!!!

and aniiiiii /shakes head ani ani ani i'm not that good!!! You speak too highly of me... >< and well... yeahhh Genderswitch... i just have the tendency to do it... IDKY I KEEP DOING IT EITHER!!! and yeappp!! DAEJAE FOR THE WORLDDDDDDD!!!! 8DDDDDD

AHHAAHHAHAHA YES KIWOON!! the readers on AFF have been asking me to continue writing the rest so i guess you could say this was the first step to coming back to the Beast writing fandom~ ><

And THANKS AGAIN FOR READING AND COMMENTING!!! <333