LoveJuice [ONE-SHOT]

[akaironoyoru]

LoveJuice

'Why am I here?' he thought to himself. 'Oh yea, Ryo and Pi thought it was a good idea.' Jin sat in the corner booth watching the people dance until his friends returned. "Jin~ don't just sit here and drink. Come dance already" Pi said as he sat down beside him. "Yea, come on Bakanishi, there's tons of hot girls here tonight." Ryo added

Comments

[michun]

Its GOOD! Don't put yourself down!
I think you should paragraph it though, to make it easier for us to read. That's just my opinion xD

[akaironoyoru]

thanks ^^ i'll paragraph it now, i thought it would when i posted it but i guess not >.

[yamapi_konkon]

*raises an eyebrow* that's smutty. lol

[akaironoyoru]

hehe ^^;

[pi_no_tsuma]

choooooooooooooooooo sugeii~!!!
I love it...hontou ni sugeii...
ahhh so smutty but I like it...
arigatou arigatou<3333

[akaironoyoru]

haha thanks, i'm glad you liked it ^^

[aya_tenshi]

WAAAA! I love it!
arigatou!

[akaironoyoru]

thanks ^^ i love your icon XD

[aya_tenshi]

arigatou... wanna take it? XD

[kazu_ya]

kyaa it was amaizing ^^!!
continue like this in your manner of writting o.o!
I like it :D!

[akaironoyoru]

wow, thanks ^^ mabye i should continue mt other story i started ^^;