Thanks, really. It's funny that you would say that though, as I consider this very sloppy writing. It's all written in simple sentences, and some are even broken and incomplete. None of it really contains any puropse, but I don't think I could have done anything better on the subject with the two hours I spent on it.
Have you taken a good English composition class? It does wonders for writing in general and you learn how to manipulate sentences to your liking. I loved it. If you haven't taken it yet, take it at OCC with Glynis Hoffman.
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It's funny that you would say that though, as I consider this very sloppy writing. It's all written in simple sentences, and some are even broken and incomplete. None of it really contains any puropse, but I don't think I could have done anything better on the subject with the two hours I spent on it.
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