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akatsuki_2007

NaNoWriMo 2009: Cold Ghost - Prologue

Dec 10, 2009 18:24

Synopsis: Cold Ghost
Here is the prologue for 'Cold Ghost'. That's the title I'm giving it for now, but I don't particularly like it at the moment. I don't know if it really says much about the story... The prologue has been edited, but anything you see highlighted in red are the bits I don't like and think need re-working. Please remember that this ( Read more... )

cold ghost, nanowrimo 2009, yakuza

Comments 4

sexyanya December 11 2009, 04:24:46 UTC

Wow man! You are really good! It is fascinating and reads like a book-shelf bestseller! Go for it, girl :)))

puredeadthingy February 26 2010, 12:52:24 UTC

Tom emailed me and asked me to give some feedback. Hi, we've met once. I'm Emma ( ... )

akatsuki_2007 February 26 2010, 16:29:10 UTC

I have to be honest: this was written for NaNoWriMo, and was written at great speed and I didn't do a huge rewrite for this section. I probably wrote it a silly o'clock, so some of the dialogue or writing is going to be a bit shaky.

But thanks, I'm glad you're looking forward to more.

puredeadthingy February 26 2010, 17:00:05 UTC

Oh, how did I miss that headline! Yeah, I did NaNo too. Much of my novel is the protagonist having weird Virgina Woolf-ey thoughts. I haven't dared let anyone see it yet XD