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akhilanda

Stratford Story

Mar 25, 2012 15:05

Titled: Stratford ( Read more... )

Comments 13

babumonkey March 25 2012, 20:51:41 UTC

Ooh, more please? Gosh this was lovely and the tension that you feel for them is so good. I felt bad for Josie, being a voyeur to the display. 'Course, that is something I did pay to see and am quite glad I did too!

akhilanda March 26 2012, 00:45:34 UTC

:) :) Thank you so much for commenting! I'm ecstatic you like this, there is more, 34 pages in total (!!) so hopefully I'll get up the courage to post more now that Akhilanda is so graciously letting me use her LJ to hide behind!
Again, thank you!

karlamartinova March 25 2012, 23:29:20 UTC

Aaaaaaaaaaaah, I am in love with this story, so real and beautifully written, I could imagine them like that and just, if you can, please write more :)

akhilanda March 26 2012, 00:47:02 UTC

**blushes** Thank you! What an absolutely fantastic comment! If people want more I can post more, it gets a bit risqué though (eek!)

karlamartinova March 26 2012, 03:57:50 UTC

Risque, why? ;)

catzeta08 March 26 2012, 15:28:01 UTC

omgomgomg i bet this happen in real life asdfghjkl;
i love it! i'm in love! ♥_♥ <3 :DD

akhilanda March 27 2012, 00:18:07 UTC

:) :) While this is pure fiction I love it if it flows enough that people can imagine it actually happening, so thank you for that fabulous comment!!

bas_math_girl March 27 2012, 22:26:13 UTC

What a gorgeous moment!! Yes, in my head this definitely happened.

akhilanda March 28 2012, 00:23:59 UTC

Why thank you so much!

sczep84 July 8 2012, 20:12:13 UTC

Perfection. Absolute perfection. This is how I imagine them to be like. And this tension u've created between them, so exquisite, so intimate, so real. And makes me feel so warm and fuzzy that it takes me right back to happy!MAAN times. Thanks so much for sharing this. I'm very much looking forward to discovering the whole story ♥

akhilanda July 10 2012, 00:56:44 UTC

:D :D *grins like an idiot* yup it is how I imagine them too, I am quite happy to live in that fictional world in mah brain and not have reality disrupt it!

It's the best compliment in the world that this takes you back to MAAN times, gosh, I may never get over how amazing a time that was!

A million thank yous for commenting! I am now on a personal mission to actually get the last chapter done and posted before you read that far!