[FIC] 1x2x1 By-the-Sentence Snippets: Preventer-ness II

[aki_midori]

1x2x1 By-the-Sentence Snippets
PREVENTER-NESS
Part II: Recovery by Aki Midori

Title: Preventer-ness Part II: Recovery
Author: Aki Midori
Pairing: Heero Yuy and Duo Maxwell
Warnings: slight angst, shonen ai if you squint
Rating: PG-13 for Shounen Ai
diSClaiMErs: Gundam Wing and the characters that I will be using are not my property. I'm using them merely

Comments

[tresa_cho]

Lovely! I like all the breaks in time. The numbered list worked well for this.

[aki_midori]

Thank you! I'm so glad you had fun reading it. I'm even more glad you didn't have a hard time reading fractured breaks. It started off as an experiment, but I loved it, and people loved it, so yeah...

Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I'll write more when I can. ^__^

[lilzazu]

I liked it a lot!! It doesn't seem like you had trouble with it!! and aww, you got funny bits and a touch of angst and a little bit of sappy stuff too!!

Thank you! ^_^

[aki_midori]

See me breathing a sigh of relief. Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for the comment. I'm glad I did OK. I used to like to combine funny and sad and emo, so I thought, what the hell. Let's try that again.

Not writing for a damn long time gives me the jitters now. I'm so glad I could still do it ok. Thank /you/, Zazu. *hugs you*

[sharona1x2]

I really enjoyed these. You have such a good sense of humor. That comes out well in your writing. #4 was especially funny!

[aki_midori]

Thanks so much, Sharon! It's been so long since I last wrote anything funny; I'm glad I could still pull it off. ^_^; Lately, whenever I read my older stuff I wanted to pull my hair out in frustration, 'coz I think I dunno how to write like that anymore. I didn't know where I got the punchlines I used to write before, which is why I'm somewhat apprehensive this time around.

Thanks for the review, Sharon. Made my day. ^__^

[aki_midori]

BTW, # 4 was the /first/ sentence I've written for this installment. *giggles*

Thanks again!

[makgambit]

This was adorable. I especially loved #20.

[aki_midori]

LOL. I just /had/ to write that one. ^o^

Thank you for reading and for the feedback! I'm so glad you liked it. ^__^