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1=2 By-the-Sentence Snippets: Sharing (a teaser)

Feb 22, 2009 05:07

1x2x1 By-the-Sentence Snippets
DOMESTICITY III - SHARING (A Teaser)
by Aki Midori

Pairing: Heero Yuy and Duo Maxwell with their pet Commodore Wilkins and a newcomer
Warnings: Utter stupidity brewed by yours truly. Forgive me. Shounen-ai. Animal thoughts.. :D
Rating: PG
dIsCLaiMerS: The characters mentioned in this madness aren't mine. Commodore Wilkins, ( Read more... )

gw fic, sentence snippets, gw, 1x2, 1=2 fic

Comments 11

sharona1x2 February 21 2009, 22:29:37 UTC

Awwww, that was very cute! I can imagine how the Commodore must feel, not knowing that his Daddies can love more than one baby.

aki_midori February 22 2009, 08:32:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. Would you believe I've been stuck writing this for weeks now? I can't even manage to write sentence snippets anymore. T.T

Still, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading the teaser. I'll be sending in the others soon! Thanks so much, Sharon!

caedi February 22 2009, 00:06:24 UTC

Oh, that was adorable- Now they have a kitten too! I think my favourite was #6, although #4 made me laugh :)

aki_midori February 22 2009, 08:34:03 UTC

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I was planning on getting another puppy for them, but where would be the fun in that?

;)

el_krusty February 22 2009, 06:39:26 UTC

awww, poor Commodore. he thinks he's gonna be abandoned XD
glad to see that you're writing again :D
love 'domesticity' but what i would love more is an update for 'wings'. pretty please :D

aki_midori February 22 2009, 08:35:46 UTC

Oh boy, am I glad to see myself writing, too! I've been reading for my thesis on yaoi manga /forever/ so this is a pleasant break. ^__^ Thank you so much! I'm also trying to add to Wing's next chapter, and oh, you have no idea how glad you made me when you said you love Wings. ^__^

I'll work on that too. Thank you!

el_krusty February 22 2009, 15:01:01 UTC

ooh, i can't wait for the update.:3 'wings' is really special to me cause it's like reading a 1=2 and senru at the same time. hahahah.i dunno, but sometimes, i imagine trowa to be sendoh and well, after a bit (well a lot) of imagination, i picture rukawa as quatre. but only in the scene when trowa said "what a fine ass it was" lol.

el_krusty February 22 2009, 16:03:33 UTC

oh.my.god. i've been reading your replies to the comments and this is the first time that i've actually read the captions on the pics!!! hilarious!!! i love duo's pics!!!
"heero yuy in porn?i'm listening." lmao

yumeyana February 22 2009, 10:13:38 UTC

AKI YOU'RE ALIVE. \o/

commodore, lol. xD oh it was pure love, aki. <3 may konting inconsistencies lang sa tenses, dear, pero otherwise, it was brilliant. (and lol for me using two languages at the same time xD)

aki_midori February 22 2009, 12:16:34 UTC

Agh! Tenses! I /so/ suck at tenses! Thanks for pointing it out, I'll try to weed them out when I post the complete version of this chapter. I /so/ need a beta-reader... *whistles* Hey... Lish... ^__^

Yeah, I'm alive. Thanks for dropping by! I'm glad you likey!

yumeyana February 23 2009, 06:15:55 UTC

tis oki, my dear. hehe. i can beta read if you want. i'm not working right now so i have some free time. ^^