Melt | 1/1 (oneshot) | ToraxShou

[akichuu]

Title: Melt
Chapter: 1/1 (oneshot)
Author: アキ
Fandom: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: I don't own the guys. Just the story.
Pairings: ToraxShou
Genre: Angst, (vague) smut
Rating: R
Warning: Weirdness. A most-likely-terrible attempt at poetic (smut) writing.
Beta: None

Summary: ... All I want is that you stop hiding. I’m trying my best to burn you, burn

Comments

[uruha1]

Wonderful wooow ... All their insecurity is seeping through each line to feel their true love towards each other with a teary eye and a lil hope for the last line of telling themselves the real truth ... Well may be next time ... May be next life ... May be never ... But definitely next time showing feeling all their love again and again ... Love is about action and not about telling stories ... *smiles with heartshaped eyes* ...

[akichuu]

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed this, despite it being vague and everything XD
It really is an open ending, so everyone's free to guess which way this relationship (if it can be called one) will go. It might grow into something good, but it might also go downhill. :3

[harurudesu]

omg that was really beautiful :'3 it was painful to the heart tho haha. but thank you so much for your amazing toraxshou fics! i hope you write more of this pairing c:

[akichuu]

You're welcome! It was fun writing about them, and it wasn't hard to look for inspiration from these two ;D
Thanks for reading and commenting :3

[noe_sakamoto]

*tabok macan ama maou*
katakan ailopyuuuuuhhhhhhhh

omaigah, lemme say tho it's angst but it's byutipul *lagu ceribel mengalun*
karena saya memang setan angst, jdnya sih walopun ini angst sayah tetep doyan mwahahahahhhhh

good job dear, u rly make a beautiful angst *is melting, setel kiyoharu kenceng2*

[akichuu]

Ahuahauhahauhah~ makanya kan, salahin BGMnya... sama suara oom Kiyo yg menyayat2...
Oke sana gantian, SHOUMERALDA!!!

[noe_sakamoto]

*nyelem ke.laut*

[kaname_aitenshi]

*kipas2 ga nyante*

Shooooooouuu!!! Denial!!! XDDD Tapi, eh, tapi... keliatan banget mereka saling mengerti satu sama laen.. awwwww

Tora juga DENIAL!!!! Baaaah.. sampe akhir juga susah mamad bilang "I LOVE YOU" *tendang Tora ma Shou di kamar, kunciin*

Chuu, kau dah bikin pagi2 menjelang siang gini kipas2 ga nyante.. XDDD

Ditunggu fic ToSho yg laennyaaaaa~ ^0^)/

[akichuu]

Ini namanya denial tapi kalo disuruh jujur, dua-duanya mau... kekekekekek~
Kek ArumxSaga *eaeaeaaaa*
Lalalalaala~ GANTIAN DUL! MANA TOSHO-MU!!!

[aoiru]

agak ingin nangis jugak sih ya, both in denial, and that was bittersweet story *timpukin chuu*
but... I love angsty story, a good one ofc, like yours eheheh, this is... well, I am speechless, idk what to say but "Holy God, this is great angsty lovely story."
There, you have it, thanks for made this chuu~~

[akichuu]

Ahahahahah~ I've always wanted to write angsty smut, tapi biasanya hasilnya ngga memuaskan... Kapan2 dicoba lagi XD

[aoiru]

tapi chuu.. kalo angsty smut biasanya eke dpt nya angst nya malahan T.T
yaahhh skrg tinggal menunggu shoumeralda ama yg dr mak arum XDDD
Dan chuu... AVA NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ///W///

[akichuu]

Arum apa Nowek? Ahuahuahuahauhaha~ avamu juga ///w///