Kyuubi at the top - Chapter 2

[akiko88]

TaDa Chapter 2 of Kyuubi at the top.

A/N - I wanted to thank everyone who reviewed this fic! And especially Tama-chan (

Comments

[vescas]

it truly is an original bit of plot XD I look forward to more!

[akiko88]

thanks! :D

[missing_nin15]

This story is really cute. The plot to get Sasuke be with Kyuubi is also original, since I really haven't seen anything like this. Heehee, and I can't wait to see what Kyuubi has in mind for Sasuke. xD

But I think Sasuke is a bit OOC. Of course his family is still alive and Itachi isn't a psychopath, so he wouldn't exactly be the angry avenger we know. Still I think Sasuke would've been a hard worker anyway, trying to desperately catch up with his brother and not let out tears easily. Perhaps you intended so Naruto would seem almighty compared to inferior Sasuke, but Kyuubi is a God anyway, but still IMO that could be done without making Sasuke really weak, especially compared to other people.

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! =D

[akiko88]

Thanks!
I know that Sasuke is OOC. It's fun writing him that way. I agree with you that Sasuke would try to be strong, I just wanted to write something different. There are many stories with Naruto being to one who is the weepy kind and I just wanted to have Sasuke in that position.

[rabid_fangrrl]

wooo hooo!
I also <3 super-uke saucecakes!
I can't wait for the next bit
...
SO HURRY!

please? ::makes giant googlie puppy eyes at you::

[akiko88]

*laughs* OMG what a name for Sasuke. I laughed so hard when I read your comment I fear I've broke something.
Saucecakes *snort* *giggle* XD XD

[thesnowtraveler]

I love your fic ^^ it's cute and original ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter =D

[akiko88]

thanks! I'll try to update as soon as possible.

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