Fic: Kyuubi at the Top - Chapter 3

Oct 06, 2008 10:26


Author: akiko88 
Title: Kyuubi at the Top
Pairing: NaruSasu
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slash, shounen-ai
Summary: Sasuke just turned 16 and as a custom of Konoha City he has to climb the Mountain of Kyuubi. But what if he isn’t allowed to leave?
Disclaimer: I don’t own
A/N: Thank you, tacuma811  for making my text readable. Thank you, Alley-Oop for pointing out some ( Read more... )

pairing: naruto/sasuke, rating: pg-13, style: chaptered, series: kyuubi at the top, fandom: naruto, length: long (over 10k)

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vescas October 6 2008, 15:13:29 UTC
*is happy you're continuing this story*

and how very cute and sweet XD Though it does seem kinda odd to have a half-demon working at a ramen stall XD I guess everyone has to make money somehow!

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akiko88 October 11 2008, 14:34:06 UTC
I'm glad your happy! :D This chapter took a lot out of me, so I'm glad you liked it.

Yeah, I does seem kind of odd to have a half-demon working at a ramen stall. But Naruto has to get the money somewhere to pamper our dear Sasuke-chan! XD

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plaidhsp October 6 2008, 18:30:49 UTC
I can't wait to see the naruto/sasuke wedding:D

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akiko88 October 11 2008, 14:35:45 UTC
I can't either!! XD It will be funny and cute!

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hikari_shiroki October 8 2008, 15:32:38 UTC
You're finally continuing this story ^^!!! I'm so glad ^^!!
Please, keep wrting! this story is more and more interesting ^^.

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akiko88 October 11 2008, 14:38:53 UTC
Sorry for the wait. RL came crashing down, so I hadn't had to time to write this fic. And then I read through what I had written, I realized that it was boring, so I rewrote it.

I'm glad you like the chapter though! :D I'll try to write the next chapter as quickly as possible!

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hikari_shiroki October 11 2008, 16:57:41 UTC
Being critic here...
I really like the first two chapters best.
They were surprising and entertaining.

This last one... is more like a link to the next part, a bridge.

But since is being so loooong since you last update is VERY well welcome ^^U... please, keep writing!!!

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luck_life October 2 2011, 06:34:51 UTC
I loved reading these three chapters! This story was so addicting, I hope you decide to continue the story soon. -crossing my fingers-
:) I can't wait to read more about Naruto and Sasuke together.

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