My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~Chapter 8 Part 2~

[akinoyama]

Title: My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~Chapter 8~
Author: Ha-chan and her recent craziness (akinoyama )
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Family Life, Romance, angst …
Warning: AU, Hikaru’s girl, Cross-gender, Unbeta-ed, Terrible English, Character’s death…
Pairings: Yabu x Hikaru, Yabu x OC, Yabu x Yuuto, Yabu x Yamada, Yamada x Yuuto, slight Daiki x OC
Disclaimer: The

Comments

[keisuke_chan182]

me first ?!!

[keisuke_chan182]

yay !! im first !! woohooo !! okayy lsta start

OMG !! why yuto dies? !!!!!!!!!! T_T
but but..the woman is yama-chan ? hahaha i love you !!
i cant think of yamada being a cruel woman o_o but u made it !! i mean u made a good-not-ending-yet story !! woohoo i cant wait to read the comtinous chapter !! but seriously i love all ur words..i love the letter yuto gave to yabu..its so sad..but sweet , yuto is soo kind !! yuto daisuki desu !! u killed urslef just for yabu , hikaru and chihara..oh talk about chihara , she really lucky ne to have friend like haa-chan and dai-chan !! im jealous..:P i want to be chihara !! hahahaa :DDDDDD btw , good job , i love you so much , when i saw ur fic , i scream O_O im just too happy , i love thi fic !! its soooooo AWESOME !!!RAWRRRRRRR !!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDD

[akinoyama]

Yes... You're first... and also the first time you left a long comment... LOVE You... Mira-chan...

First, thank you for reading and commenting...

Yuuto dies because he didn't want to let Yama-chan alone... Yes... the woman's Yama-chan...
I also can't think about it... but it's only fiction... don't think it seriously...

Thank you for saying so... >/////////<
Yuuto's letter is the main point of this part... since I don't want make Yuuto being hated... LOL...

Yeah... Yuuto Daisuki... He actually was killed by Yama-chan and he killed Yama-chan...

Chihara-chan? Didn't you say you want to be her adpoted mother?? Now... You want to be her?? fufufufufu....

And thank you for loving this fic.... *hug you*
and for the compliments....

[keisuke_chan182]

yay im first !! heehe oh O: yes this is the first time i wrote long comments :P hehehe

I LOVE YOU TOO !!!!

i know i know..yamajima is cute !! aha :D but i like yabuhika more xP

WELCOME ! NO PROBS MEHH ~~

yes i know that , because yuto's letter is the longest part in this fic O_O but its full og meaningful words ^___^

hahahhaa thats true !! he killed her and she killed him yoo !! what the fish hahahaha but thats sooo right..

yes i've said that , but when i saw hara-chan so0 happy then i want to be her o_o

hug you back !! douITAI !! :D

[akinoyama]

Yup.... YABUHIKA....

Sorry for YAMAJIMA....

Thank you reading and commenting... Maria...

[stevenica]

O__O ---> (T v T

[stevenica]

Ahahaha, I'm insane~
I enjoyed this chapter too much and it made me too happy (LOL...I didn't mean I'd love to see Yamajima dead~ no no no...!) =D

Since I'm in such a good mood, now I want to see sth about Hika suffering (OMG, this person(= me) is out of her mind! Didn't she get heart-broken all the time seeing Hika being tortured in previous chapters?!!! Now she's asking for that? lol)

Well...maybe a reflection on how painful & hard & prolonged suffocation it was for Hika to give birth to Chihara???! Just a silly suggestion XPPP

P.S.Okay, I love my ICON 8DDD

[akinoyama]

Hikaru suffering??? And your suggestion.... might be appeared later.... fufufufufufu...

P.S. Oh yeeessssssssss........ I love your icon too... Ja... send me the bigger version... so I can use it as my wallpaper on my laptop... Hahhahahahaha........

[akinoyama]

0__0 For your long comment

[lynn_369]

I really really REALLY CAN'T BELIEVE that Yabu's ex was Yamada!!! *shock o.O* *try to imagine Yamachan being like a stalker... -.- *
I thought it was Inoo!!! hahah
but u're right, we just can't put Inoo between YabuHika again & again, it's a bit unfair for him if we do so ne~

I like this chap XD (especially Yuto's letter XP)

[akinoyama]

I can't either.....

thank you... I'm afraid they'll get disappointed.

Yuuto's letter is the main point...

Thank you for reading and commenting.......

[blozzom_zone]

finally, this is really the end of YamaJima nee *cries*
poor Yuto sensei, hope he will happy nee;D
and Yuto's letter was heart breaking D; such a caring friend T___T and *blushed* I was being loved by my twin ♥

but blushed even harder when Dai-chan ruffled my hair >/////< lol

sorry for commenting so late Ha-chan T^T you know best why~

[akinoyama]

Etou... It's not really the end of YamaJima.... fufufufufufufu....

Yep... I've given my best to write his letter in order to show his perspective... and hoped readers could understand his position... You'll know.... he's been loving you ever since okaa-chan came to his life...

As your request...

Ii yo... I understand...