My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~Chapter 9~ Part 1

[akinoyama]

Title: My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~Chapter 9~
Author: Ha-chan and her recent craziness (akinoyama)
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Family Life, Romance, bit angst later…
Warnings: Unbetaed, AU, Hikaru and Yamada’re girl, Terrible English
Pairing: Yabu x Hikaru, Yabu x OC, Yabu x Yamada, Yamada x Yuuto, Yabu x Yuuto
Disclaimer: The plot
Synopsis: Yabu and

Comments

[stevenica]

Claim 1st = =+

[akinoyama]

Congratz for taking first place... *clapping my hands*

Owh... you directly use that screencap...

And ganbatte for typing the reports...

[stevenica]

Gomen for not giving the PROPER comment for daysssss... my own problems XP

[stevenica]

Did you kinda write this chapter in a rush so you forgot to depict into their inner-voice & inner-feelings

[tawnii_arioka]

Oh my GOD. OH.MY.GOD.
Why must you have a cliffhanger?
Oh, I'm a big fan, big fan of your writing! <3 :DDD
This is REALLY good.

[akinoyama]

OMG! OMG!
Because someone told me a multi-chapter and cliffhanger are inseparable.... LOL....

My writing's big fan???? Ah... I'm touched >/////<
Thank you so much for saying so.... I'm so happy you like my work.... although I'm not really a good writer...

Last... thank you for reading and commenting...

[keisuke_chan182]

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
this is kinda dirty :PP
but i love it nyahahahahaha :D

[akinoyama]

LOL.......
Thaks for reading and commenting....

[keisuke_chan182]

welcome nya !

[akinoyama]

Yes... UPDATE...
You'll know it in the next chapter...

P.S. Thank you so much for saying so... >////////

[blozzom_zone]

It's true otou-chan, I really am your daughter =v=+
the misunderstanding somehow have to be cleared, c'mon okaa-chan, just be honest and tell otou-chan the truth >___<
can't wait for the next Ha-chan;)
and please promise me, you wont change the ending, it's perfect already XDDD

p.s: and don't forget i reserved first comment on your last chap nee^^

[akinoyama]

Heyy.... who said you're Yabu-sensei's daughter???
You've to wait very long...
The ending... Etou... etou... hmmm.... let me think about it... LOL.....

P.S. Hai... hai... in the chapter 10 or the special chapter?