Chapter 9 Part 3A

Jun 06, 2010 12:54


Title: My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~Chapter 9~
Author: Ha-chan and her recent craziness (akinoyama)
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Family Life, Romance, bit angst later…
Warnings: Unbetaed, AU, Hikaru and Yamada’re girl, Terrible English
Pairing: Yabu x Hikaru, Yabu x OC, Yabu x Yamada, Yamada x Yuuto, Yabu x Yuuto
Disclaimer: The plot
Synopsis: Yabu and ( Read more... )

yaotome hikaru okaa-chan, fiction writing, yamada ryousuke, multi-chapter, fic: my former lovers & her daughter, yabu kouta otou-chan, perfect couple koutahikaru

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stevenica June 6 2010, 22:58:27 UTC
YabuHika's mother claims 1st OvO~!

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stevenica June 6 2010, 23:17:51 UTC
I got so immersed in your fic that I could bearly breathe while I was reading this chapter D:
I nearly stopped breathing XP *pants so hard after finished reading*

Even all my muscles tensed up and I couldn't even move an inch while I was reading this.

It really tore my heart into a million,trillion, zillion pieces hearing Hikari-chan's life story.
I can't imagine but I CAN imagine *what am I talking about?!*

*controls & moderates my breathless breath*
*pants pants pants...* Hikari-chan T__T
My poor poor daughter! HEARTBROKEN like that...

*cannot organize my brain, my mind now*
Gomenne...I have to find a way to make myself breathe properly first before I can make further comments on this. *prevents myself from fainting*
*lays back & pants pants pants*

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akinoyama June 8 2010, 02:29:14 UTC
easy... easy.... dear....

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keisuke_chan182 June 8 2010, 09:55:54 UTC
WOOOOOOO i always adore ur words ,
they are all beautifull ,
im envy >//<

awww poor hika-chan...
she went through hard times herslf TOT
how could yabu's not-really-friend did that to her !!!haiiiisssssssssssssssssh T_T

dont worry hika-chan..yabu stil with you ,
and hear what he want to say na ^^
be patient to it ^^
ganbatte hika-chan !!!!!! :DDD

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akinoyama June 18 2010, 01:58:20 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww............. Thank you so much for saying so.......... >//////////////<

Umm... she went through all of them alone........

Thank you for reading and commenting......
Mira-chan...

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blozzom_zone June 9 2010, 04:38:54 UTC
Inoo-Chii you're so dead -.-"
You guys were the true 'evil' here actually x(
Poor Okaa-chan T^T Poor me T___T *tapi klo ga gini aku ga bakal ketemu Dai-chan juga kali ya? xPP*

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akinoyama June 18 2010, 01:59:22 UTC
*G jg kali.... kn klo udh jodoh pasti ad jalan buat ketemu jg.....*

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