Chapter 9 Part 3B

[akinoyama]

Title: My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~Chapter 9~
Author: Ha-chan and her recent craziness (akinoyama )
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Family Life, Romance, bit angst later…
Warnings: Unbetaed, AU, Hikaru and Yamada’re girl, Terrible English
Pairing: Yabu x Hikaru, Yabu x OC, Yabu x Yamada, Yamada x Yuuto, Yabu x Yuuto
Disclaimer: The plot
Synopsis: Yabu and Hikaru met

Comments

[blozzom_zone]

Claim FIRST :p

[akinoyama]

douzou...

and congratz since you don't have to go to internet cafe anymore....

[blozzom_zone]

okay, time to properly comment now:)

*cinta bahasa indonesia mode on^o^*

hhay, akhirnya kesalah pahaman itu bisa 'clear' juga *tetep aja nyempil2 bhs inggrisnya xP*

dan...dan...ternyata sumber masalah yg sebenernya adalah dua member least favorite saya di JUMP a.k.a Inoo-Chii *oh guys you're so dead* tapi aku bisa bayangin mereka ngelakuin itu sih, namanya juga evil xPPP lol

I love this chapter Ha-chan! Full with emotion ♥

okay, goes to read the next part^^

[blozzom_zone]

lol aku comment di part 3Bnya dulu baru part 3Anya? eror...~
gomen Ha-chan, semalem cuma tidur 2 jam...jadinya begini deh >___<"

*mata udah protes minta nutup -.-"*

[kawaiimaix3]

Cho Kawaii~
I'm glad they made up :)

[akinoyama]

so am I....

Thank you for reading and commenting, Mai-chan....

[stevenica]

T__T I began to cry starting from when I reached the 8th line of this part...and I kept sniffing and tears continued to roll down my face throughout reading the rest of it. *still sniffing*
Cried so much that my tears even drowned my dinnerXP

I kinda stopped crying when Inoo's name appeared and started to curse him instead LOL

But then there're other parts which made me cry again...and cry again T___T

I guess I have to calm down before commenting on this part as well. Sorry ne...*pants while wiping away my tears*

[stevenica]

Lord~!
...I just...I even just shivered & trembled DDDX

You MUST help me pull myself out from your fic~
Perhaps you should have put a warning before every part of your fic, saying [[PLEASE DON'T GET INTO HIKARI-CHAN'S CHARACTER WHILE READING. THANKS FOR YOUR CO-OPERATION]]...XP

aw...I'm useless
My heart physically feels so fragile everytime I read any parts of this fic D: Physically, not even only mentally. T__T I'm scared

[stevenica]

Oh no no no TAT
You should add another warning which says [[PLEASE DON'T BE JEALOUS WITH HIKARI-CHAN]]

...I was crying when I got too into that BUT BUT BUT when I tried to pull myself out and away from the story & to read it in an outsider's perspective, I started to cry as well now DDD: T___T
...I'm envious of Hika in so many ways. I am. I do.

It's become even harder for me to breathe now D:
*closes my eyes trying to calm down*

This is so difficult for me to read this fic EITHER WAY, no matter from Hikari-chan's point of view or just a reader's. This is hard D: Sorry.

But it's such a great fic afterall.
Or else, it wouldn't have had such huge effects & influence on me.
Ain't I right?XP
Plus, I love Ha-chan so much afterall <3

[akinoyama]

Maa.... I'm sorry dear.... for making you always cry after reading it...

take your time to calm down...
I'll be patiently waiting...

Love you too...

[peyancarla]

they're cleared!!yay!

aww..cliffhanger again..
i'm guessing who that person is..
[i'm thinking of a guy..]

[akinoyama]

Yeah... yokatta nee..

hahaha...

Thank you for reading and commenting....