Chapter 9 Part 5

[akinoyama]

Title: My Former Lovers and Her Daughter ~Chapter 9~

Author: Ha-chan and her recent craziness (akinoyama )

Rating: PG-15

Genre: Family Life, Romance, bit angst later…

Warnings: Unbetaed, AU, Hikaru and Yamada’re girl, Terrible English

Pairing: Yabu x Hikaru, Yabu x OC, Yabu x Yamada, Yamada x Yuuto, Yabu x Yuuto

Disclaimer: The plot

Synopsis: Yabu

Comments

[blozzom_zone]

FIRST again XDDD Yay!!!

[blozzom_zone]

OMG OMG OMG....><
I love this chapter the most ♥ SERIOUSLY..Family Gathering XDDD

OMG< i"m speechless, I don't know what to say anymore~

I love this, thnaks a lot Ha-chan for letting me to be part of this happy family *hugs* ♥

Otou-chan was being jealous to Keito XDD & Dai-chan, yay ♥ I hope you will make the extra story of this as you've promised ♥ I really want to see Yabu, cough, otou-san reaction XDD

haha, smart Ha-chan! tho, you're being cruel to Keito again lol

“It’s not Yabu-sensei. It’s otou-san da yo.” He corrected with shaky voice.---> I love this part the most >___<

thanks Ha-chan, all your three fics have reminded me how I was so in love with JUMP (esp Yabuika, YamaJimaTaro & Dai-chan XDD)

yay, I'm so wanna write a YabuHika fic right now & continue my story, thanks Ha-chan, that's all because of you ♥

[akinoyama]

I'm so happy today... because you love my three fics for today... :) :) :)

Yeah... family gathering... On the draft I didn't write, did I?

Haha... since you're speechless... so I don't know what to say...

You're welcome... but your parents' real happiness is still... have another obstacle... from... your grandparents.... hahahahaha....

I hope I can...

Keito... oji-chan... don't be mad okay... or I'll cry...

Yeah... I love that part too... It must be a touching scene seeing the three of them could be together...

You're welcome...

Yay... I'm waiting your works then...

And thank you for reading and commenting today....

[blozzom_zone]

oh...and I don't think you are failed at describing Chihara's feeling, my feeling yo...I was still in kindergarten right??? I do think being burst out of happiness is the best expression ;)

[icarus_fly]

okay so i read everything non-stop first before commenting...
OMG! i can't wait for an update! I was just holding my tears back coz my dad is around...super kawaii! and the story line is just lovable!! kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~`

[akinoyama]

Eh???? You read all chapters non-stop??? It's tiring yo...
I've updated....
Thank you for reading and commenting...