[Fic] Let's Break Up

Oct 08, 2010 11:17

Title: Let’s Break Up
Author: Ha-chan and her recent sadness (akinoyama )
Pairings: YabuHika, slight InooBu
Genre: ANGST
Summary: 5 Times Hikaru Thought about Break up + 1 Time He Told Yabu
Warnings: Unbetaed, terrible English,
Notes: 1. For YabuHika-thon (Prompt #52)
           2. the 5 times is written in Hikaru's POV, the +1 is in 3rd person POV

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yaotome hikaru okaa-chan, yabu kouta otou-chan, one-shot, perfect couple koutahikaru

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Comments 16

aliciaswr October 8 2010, 04:36:59 UTC
Ouch.

That's only what I can say/feel at the moment.. T.T

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akinoyama October 8 2010, 07:02:30 UTC
Gomen nasai.... T.T

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akinoyama October 8 2010, 13:28:54 UTC
Forget to say...
thank you for reading and commenting...

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aliciaswr October 8 2010, 13:47:19 UTC
You're welcome.

Thanks for writing! xcD

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linachan001 October 8 2010, 12:12:04 UTC
*crying on her bed with millions of tissues surrounding her*

T.T

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akinoyama October 8 2010, 13:20:40 UTC
Gomen nasai.... T.T
I really don't mean to make anyone cry here....
I really am sorry...
*bows down*

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akinoyama October 8 2010, 13:27:19 UTC
Ah...
Thanks for reading and commenting...

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blozzom_zone October 8 2010, 12:59:09 UTC
I HATE INOO!!!

my poor YabuHika T___T but Yabu deserved that ;P

P.S: I'm sorry for your brother Ha-chan ;( but just keep believing that God probably has prepared someone better for him ne:)

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akinoyama October 8 2010, 13:25:55 UTC
You always...

Yeah I know... it's our poor YabuHika... T___T
But... I'm just feeling blue right now...
Gomen nasai... Hara-chan...
thanks for dropping a comment...

P.S:
Thank you Hara-chan....
I hope he can get through this... coz it's already his third time of broken heart(as far as I know) *sigh* (susah cari orng baik ya skrng??? aduh2...)

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akinoyama October 8 2010, 13:52:05 UTC
Btw... What's Yabu deserved for???
Breaking up or death??? *curious*

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stevenica October 9 2010, 00:27:40 UTC
I'm sorry for your bro. God bless him.
I know he'll find someone better & be happy very soon =)

But for me... after reading this fic, my bed which I'm lying on now has become a boat... floating in the sea of my tears TAT!!!!
THIS FIC IS TERRIBLY HEARTBREAKING!!!!!!!!
No matter it's the pain Hikari-chan suffered or Yabu's death... T___T Why killed Yabu? [strike]you should have killed Inoo instead [/strike]
...and dun make me dislike Yabu even more TAT!

This is too depressing for me who's already in depression and a depressed mood... T___________________T

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akinoyama October 9 2010, 00:48:11 UTC
Thank you... stevenica-chan...
But... it's not easy to find a partner to accompany you for the rest of your life nee... mainly the FAITHFUL one...

T_____T I'm so sorry for writing this...
Is that really heartbreaking????? I didn't have much confidence when I posted it as I'm not good about such cheating on issue...

Who said Yabu's dead??? I dun write anything about death.....

I'm sorry... I'm not in the mood of being kind to Yabu Kouta right now...
Did Yabu Kouta make you angry again???

Dear... I've already written ANGST yo in the genre....
You dun have to force yourself for reading it if you're not in a good mood nee...

Thanks for reading and commenting though... ^^
And find another thing to make you happy again and forget this fic...

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lynn_369 October 15 2010, 09:17:59 UTC
.... *cant say anything right after read this fic* ....
I'm sorry for ur brother
I hope he will find a better person & be happy w/ her really soon ne~
and I'm agree w/ u, live is not always about happiness

Well it's heartbreaking, poor Hikaru, feel so bad for him
YabuHikaInoo... undead cycle na~ hahaha

btw,cheer up!!
Ganbatte nyaaaa~!!! hohoho >w

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akinoyama October 15 2010, 09:26:09 UTC
Thanks for your concern...
I hope he could pass this and find his real happiness as well...
Ganbatte nee... onii-chan...

I felt bad too when I was writing this... moreover the song 'Let's Break Up' accompanied me too... DDDDD:
The song and also the voice's singer influenced my mood...
Gomen nee... Hikaru-chan... but Yabu is like a playboy...
Recently he even stated that Dai-chan is like his girlfriend...

Yeah undead cycle of YabuHikaNoo... maybe they are the top OT3 of HSJ... xP

Thank you for reading and commenting...
It made me cheer up..

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