[Chapter 4] Verse Two

Jun 23, 2008 00:47

Title: Verse Two
Length: Chaptered, Chapter 4
Pairings: Yoosu, YunJae.
Overall Rating: R (Mpreg)
Section rating: NC-17 (just to be safe. Its only a puny part XD)
Author: Akioflove
Summary: Kim Junsu is stuck with the decision of leaving his player boyfriend with an unborn child or to stick with him for the rest of his life, living in a lie. But the ( Read more... )

verse two, fanfic

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jaeholife June 22 2008, 17:01:12 UTC
first?>

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akioflove June 22 2008, 17:02:18 UTC
YES YOU ARE.

NINJA!

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jaeholife June 22 2008, 20:56:23 UTC
sorry, late in commenting since I have exams now..

anyhow, this really sad, Junsu is suffering and that's all becaise of that idoit Yoochun..

Jae's really such a nice brother, and I do agree with him, Yoochun really don't know a thing about Junsu, and he doesn't even deserve the baby, or Junsu and hope that he is suffer a lot and learn not to play with people's feeling ....

he should....anyway I will keep on blahing now,,but I REALLY LIKED THIS CHAPTER ....

anyway thanks

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akioflove June 23 2008, 11:30:14 UTC
aw, its okay! good luck with exams! ^_^

jaejoong is going to pounce on yoochun if yoochun keeps up with his ways. ;_; but now junsu's gone, i think they both have to stick tgt to find junsu baby back. haha

wheeeeeeee, thank you for liking this chapter! :D

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chloe1910 June 22 2008, 17:14:35 UTC
Yay! Updates!!!

My heart break for Junsu but I'm glad that Taewoo is kind enough to take him in...

Jaejoong is right..Yoochun didn't know a fucking thing about Junsu...and seriously, I don't think Yoochun deserve to know that Junsu is pregnant with his child. But then again, I hope this info will make him so guiltily sick that it'll slowly eat up his conscience and torture him mentally...

Yoochun need to learn his lessons..HARD

Junsu, I hope you will not forgive Yoochun so easily....perhaps, Junsu will meet a nice man and that person will give Yoochun some competition.

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akioflove June 22 2008, 17:21:13 UTC
I GUESS ITS REALLY BEEN THIS LONG SINCE I LAST UPDATE HUH. :D

hahahah, i hope i havent torment you guys enough with my lack of updates. ;_;

yoochun gets his heartbreak! its going PIANG PIANG PIANG while junsu's not turning back. and now he knows he's got his junsu knocked up. XD so dont worry about the guilt trip down the road, yoochun cannot skip that. hahah!

^__^ JUNSU WILL MAKE IT HARD. YAY. hahah

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chloe1910 June 22 2008, 17:36:26 UTC
Yay!! Damn I think we're being rather evil here for rejoicing in tormenting Yoochun, but he totally deserved it...

You still haven't reveal out who's the person who appear in the prologue..you knwo the one who said that Junsu is not Yoochun's toy anymore?

I wanted to say Taewoo..but he's just a driver..I don't think he'll dare to say that in fear of losing his job right? So who's it? Yunho? Cause Junsu is like his brother (in-law) and he wants to protect him? Or a suitor perhaps???

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akioflove June 22 2008, 17:38:14 UTC
XD

person will be revealed in the next chapter!

(but i can give you a hintttttttt, its a brand new character. not yunho nor is it taewoo. XD taewoo has a wifey! hahahh so cannot be the one. hahah)

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zhe01 June 22 2008, 17:23:37 UTC
*whacks Yoochun on the head repeatedly* GO FIND HIM YOU STUPID LITTLE BRAT.

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akioflove June 22 2008, 17:26:05 UTC
*shields yoochun*

HE WILL FIND JUNSU! :D

just...not now. hahhaha! but he will! and he will suffer a little bittt to get his baby back. ^_^

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zhe01 June 22 2008, 17:44:00 UTC
*POINTS THREATENING NOODLE* GOOD. SUFFER FOR MAKING JUNSU CRY!

O_____________________________O!!!!!!!!

*WAVES NOODLE DANGEROUSLY*

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akioflove June 22 2008, 17:47:16 UTC
WELCOME TO THE TORMENT YOOCHUB CLUB. 8D

but we love yoochun too much and micky knows it. hahaha!

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reader_a June 22 2008, 17:23:42 UTC
what a story.... you have me hooked, I found this and... poor Junsu!! *huggles him*
I feel so bad for him!
and Yoochun being an idiot...
Taewoo is a sweetie, I hope we get to see him more ^^
Thanks for sharing ^^

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akioflove June 22 2008, 17:25:14 UTC
*hugs junsu too*

i've made him a really sad character in my story. ;_;

and wheee, thanks for reading! ^_^

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reader_a June 22 2008, 17:27:33 UTC
he must be so lonely!
I hope that he'll have the strength to at least call JaeJoong and tell him that he's fine. *cuddles Junsu some more*

I saw you had a writersblock - is it better?

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akioflove June 22 2008, 17:32:06 UTC
aw, but i dont know if junsu's pride will ever allow jaejoong to ever know of his state now. T_T

but yea, i'll make junsu more okay in the later chapter. if not junsu is sooooooo sad it breaks my heart even. hahah

writer's block will be cleared with the right dosage of changmin in her life! ^_^

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shinhwoo June 22 2008, 17:42:58 UTC
wah~
chunnie finally knows about the baby!!!!
yay!!!!^^
aw, & taewoo is so sweet^^
even though this may be angst, you wrote it so beautifully & i can't wait for them to work it out!!!!!!!!
update soon^^

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akioflove June 22 2008, 17:44:06 UTC
OH YAY~ because baby makes ita double guilt for yoochun. :D

i am so evil. hhahaha!

and aw thank you! i will try to update it soon~

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