Payback Time (Chapter 2)

Jul 23, 2010 17:45



Payback Time

Length: 2/5

Pairing: Kyuwook

Rating: NC-17

Genre: romance, drama, smut, and comedy

Summary: Kim Ryeowook, a 17 year old boy, gets a new job as a maid in an extravagant five-star hotel, and he loves it. He makes new friends along the way, the guests and other employees are extremely nice to him, and best of all, he gets paid! But then one ( Read more... )

pairing : kyuwook

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cm_eraser July 23 2010, 12:45:04 UTC
kyu is so evil. XD
poor wookie but he sure is enjoying everything.

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thatsforme2know July 23 2010, 15:49:25 UTC
???? ?_______? i thought this idea was urs
awwhh how sad, i aint gonna read it anymore
u shouldnt trust that friend of urs anymore... >>;;
like u should give it a try bby and write ur own stories :DD

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akmanafeera91 July 23 2010, 16:00:09 UTC
All my other story are write by me.
now im so buzy with collage life and assignment, so when someone want to give me story that can cover my buzy life*that can make me still alive coz when im not posting something in a long time, someone will think im not interesting in LJ*

and and she *the person that give me this story* is NOT my friends.
she my own sister. erm so ofcause i will believe when she said she write it.
omg! im so stupid to believe in her! *sorry but i trust people so easily, but what can i said, she my own sister, ofcause sisters will not lie to eachother right?* -i guess im wrong.

im so sorry unnie. i will not post it anymore.
i will try write something my own and maybe its gonna take long time coz gosh! my assignment are already killing half of my brain.
mianhe again unnie.
*really from bottom of my heart*

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fuyu_miyuki July 23 2010, 16:22:59 UTC
haha this is awesome :D
i was about to doze off while recording all the results [>< research report D:] and such (its 12:14am now) when the cute "hiding" scene between wookie and kyu woke me up :D
then the part where wookie decided to sort of "top" kyu made me wide awake (*EYES WIDENED A LOT AND DECIDED TO REREAD THAT PART) :DD
can't wait to see what wookie's punishment is ~ [*starts to have weird thoughts early in the morning (mentally slaps self)*]
haha and deep down wookie is actually enjoying what kyu did to him [even though he kept having some mental struggle :O]

and don't worry the smut part is not lame ~ its good ~! :D

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elfkyulaine July 23 2010, 21:57:31 UTC
Hey...i have an idea...what if you still continue it and write your own version from part 3-5 or if you want, make it long...just to make the flow of story different from minholover...i already read the whole story and its really great...and don't forget to talk first to minholover...

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akmanafeera91 July 31 2010, 19:29:52 UTC
im happy minholover allow me to continue posting this story but i much give credit to her *and i will*
i will post the next part later..

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animemanga1994 July 24 2010, 02:49:35 UTC
luuvv how ryeowook is becoming to like sexy kyuhyun and how leeteuk doesnt know anything<333 thank you for the update!!!

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